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First Sunday Premiere Contest Winner

The first Sunday I knew emptiness, The day midnight opened its door, With me, this hollow has stayed, A symphony that has intermittently played. Unshielded I was for this, Halted it had me in my footsteps, I walk like a wounded hare, At me, grief has chosen to stare. You eased into the night, I lost hope’s light, My soul is despondent, I'm a tree with feeble boughs. Sunset memories cloud my chamber, They stealthy creep into my slumber, You said twilight has a voice, This I hear in turbulent rhythms. June 16, 2023.

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Date: 6/19/2023 4:41:00 PM
Wonderful winning write for this contest.
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Date: 6/21/2023 2:08:00 PM
Thank you, David. It's an honour.
Date: 6/19/2023 2:09:00 PM
Thompson, congratulations on your trophy win, an excellent poem, full of grief and emotion.
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Date: 6/21/2023 2:07:00 PM
Thank you, I'm honoured.
Date: 6/19/2023 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement. Nicely penned.
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Date: 6/21/2023 12:11:00 PM
Thank you, Joanna. It's an honour.

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