Premiere Contest WinnerFirst Sunday

The first Sunday I knew emptiness,
The day midnight opened its door,
With me, this hollow has stayed, 
A symphony that has intermittently played.

Unshielded I was for this,
Halted it had me in my footsteps,
I walk like a wounded hare,
At me, grief has chosen to stare.

You eased into the night,
I lost hope’s light,
My soul is despondent,
I'm a tree with feeble boughs.

Sunset memories cloud my chamber,
They stealthy creep into my slumber,  
You said twilight has a voice,
This I hear in turbulent rhythms.


June 16, 2023.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fisher Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 4:41 PM
Wonderful winning write for this contest.
Emate Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 2:08 PM
Thank you, David. It's an honour.
Kitchin Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 2:09 PM
Thompson, congratulations on your trophy win, an excellent poem, full of grief and emotion.
Emate Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 2:07 PM
Thank you, I'm honoured.
Chamberlain Avatar
June 19, 2023 at 1:14 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement. Nicely penned.
Emate Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 12:11 PM
Thank you, Joanna. It's an honour.
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