first snow

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Written on December 12, 2023

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frosty gray whispers, sighing like the silent night, gentling trembling flakes

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2023 5:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement on the winner's list in Tania's contest. Way to go. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2023 11:34:00 AM

Such a well deserved first place. Congrats and thanks for your my recent win.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/24/2023 2:05:00 PM

A delightful 3 liner, Gina; I like the imagery and personification. Congrats and Regards // paul

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/24/2023 12:19:00 PM

Gina, a wonderful haiku, love the last line, congratulations on your first place win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2023 4:39:00 PM

Wow, yours is amazing, Gina

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/12/2023 4:04:00 PM

a delicate and flowing Haiku...especially the last line! I loved it...best wishes with the contest, Sara

Silent One

Date: 12/12/2023 7:38:00 AM

The imagery in this haiku is so vivid.. this will do well in the contest..

Ink Empress

Date: 12/12/2023 7:37:00 AM

Beautiful haiku. Love the way this flows delicately and smoothly, especially “ sighing like the silent night,“ i love that and the picture goes so well with the haiku. Pleasure reading your haiku. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always