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First Smile - Poem For My Granddaughter

Your first smile wiped away the dust and mold from the canvas of my soul and your first laughter splashed its bright colours over dark and somber tones and then you framed it with a rainbow created by the refracted light of your transparent being.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/29/2013 9:30:00 PM
How sweet that power of even a small smile. Welcome to P-Soup and keep on writing SuZ
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Leo Sanmi
Date: 5/20/2013 6:00:00 AM
Now I see what you are saying. A smile is a wonderful was of talking without uttering a word. it is a commune of souls. Nice poem. Keep writing
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David De La Croes
Date: 4/2/2013 12:40:00 AM
Thanks, SuZ!

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