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 No Poet, eyes upon.
 My heart began to rhyme you.
 Get with the situation.


(SHORT)
 First Haiku ever.
 Joy of write, Haikus delight.
 So cut me some slack.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/7/2016 8:42:00 AM
Not at all bad for your first haiku attempt, Linda. I see that advice has been coming your way:) Haiku is an art that takes lots of practice, something which I am still doing, and am still learning in the process. Hugs // paul
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Date: 2/1/2015 6:17:00 PM
I like them both Linda. Great work. Well done. Keep on penning. Keep up with the great work. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 9/10/2014 8:34:00 PM
What will your husband say if he finds out about us.
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Date: 8/2/2014 2:29:00 PM
Found this after having posted my first HaiKu here, called "First Time". Regards from Berlin! LupusDigit
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Date: 12/12/2013 7:32:00 PM
oi..This is bad
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Date: 11/10/2013 10:18:00 PM
Linda These are cute and clever. Short but full of meaning. Nice job Hugs
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Date: 4/22/2013 10:15:00 PM
Cool poem! I read below it was featured. Congrats on that. Really liked these lovely haikus Always, Laura
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Date: 3/3/2013 12:38:00 PM
Dear Linda, As a novice POET my Favorite forms are Haiku,Senryu,Free Verse,Rhyme, and lately Narrative. I am not a critic, but the original Haiku was 5-7-5 Your first one was 6-7-7 the second one perfect Loved the message though. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 12/8/2012 10:58:00 PM
Soup Mail. Reading certain messages helps me understand.
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Date: 8/21/2012 3:04:00 PM
enjoyed reading tonight, my friend x
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Date: 8/16/2012 6:20:00 AM
i like these too, pd, count me in as a major fan of yours, but then again i've always been a fan of yours. i see too that dg's comments are a bit like she comments on my poetry, that is when she can be bothered.
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Date: 11/11/2010 10:50:00 AM
smiles as I read this-- am no haiku expert so I'm just enjoying this :) --haha I should be packing what am I doing here??
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Date: 10/31/2010 2:48:00 PM
good stuff,p d.
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Date: 10/28/2010 9:02:00 PM
P.D.--Why are you leaving? Are you just taking a break?
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Date: 10/26/2010 7:07:00 AM
No slack needed. This is better by far than most. Love, Dave
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Date: 10/25/2010 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week P.D. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2010 4:32:00 PM
Congrats P.D. my BFF on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great piece to share with us all with luv my friend.. keep charming us luv...
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Date: 10/19/2010 3:28:00 PM
Love your first Haiku... soup mail love...
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Date: 6/1/2010 6:43:00 PM
LOL, D.G. this was not ment for your eyes. i just stored it in here for a friend. now i get your comment you vile women,..p.d.
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Date: 6/1/2010 4:36:00 PM
naww like the taste of curdled milk...my mouths tastes my hate for you....like the painful lingering scen of skunk on a precious cat...my hate for you clings....gumming up my mind like bubble gum in a braid.....smooch
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Date: 5/27/2010 6:46:00 AM
A lot of hate there...good one there and funny, too, despite the fact that it is about hate. Emily
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Date: 5/8/2010 8:05:00 AM
brilliant. :)
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Date: 4/28/2010 5:21:00 PM
I'll cut you some slack. I used Xena for visualization when I had cancer. Think it helped and I wrote into into the New York Times and said so. Hope I in - lightened you Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/28/2010 12:59:00 AM
i enjoyed reading this poem, its very nice. By the way thank you for the suggestion I changed my poems name to challenge :)
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Date: 4/27/2010 7:18:00 AM
hello there and thanks for your thoughtful comment. I absolutely LOVE the line "My heart began to rhyme you." wow - excellent!!! love, shar
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