First Senryu

"Flirting with the Idea"
by:  Eric L. Boddie

I hope you wont think
that because I do not blink
that I will not wink
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sietesantos Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 1:27 PM
Excellently constructed Senryu with great wit! You are doing great, my friend! Enjoyed the read! Pandita
Roper Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 3:25 PM
Eric this is wonderful a7. Broken Wing is write, I learned that the hard way but I'm still learning because they tell me it is suppose to stand on it's own. Hugs Eve
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 3:24 PM
looks like I learned the hard way too....lol....but so glad I have friends like you 2 to steer me in the right direction....;)
La France Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 1:06 PM
Eric . . very nice but I think this is a senryu as haiku is always about nature, but I am no expert and I do like it a lot and thanks for visiting my poem, father . . . Yes I was very lucky to have this wonderful man as a father~~
Boddie Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 3:23 PM
thank you so much bw....I have made my necessary corrections....still I am glad you like these words too....;)
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