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First Recital

Cherubic face focused intently on her task Nervous tongue flicking across dry lips Her tiny hands leaping across the keys While her feet dangled above the pedals. Her tulle-faced dress meticulously sewn Bright patent leather-strapped shiny sandals Pink socks with white lace carefully folded over Long blonde braids secured with small satin bows. The ornamental piece was flawlessly performed Obligatory bow taken, quickly she dashed away Embarrassed, it seemed, to have the attention My six-year-old granddaughter’s first recital.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/3/2021 5:22:00 PM
So adorable. I just can picture it so well from the exquisite poetic details you have penned. Sweet as sugar. Enjoy! Light and Love, Gershon
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/3/2021 7:03:00 PM
Thanks again, Gershon. I truly enjoyed penning this piece.
Date: 3/2/2021 7:41:00 PM
Gorgeous. I'm sure she was amazing! God bless you always with love, Gina - Ooops... I see this was fiction from your last comment! Excellent rendition!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/2/2021 7:56:00 PM
Yep, not my granddaughter. However, to my credit, I taught piano for many years and suffered through many, many recitals. I have observed this scene more times than I can count. They were all rousing successes!!!
Date: 3/2/2021 10:24:00 AM
- A beautiful picture of your granddaughter ... I can see her ... I guess you is very proud of her :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/2/2021 10:42:00 AM
Time for confession. I have three beautiful granddaughters and though I play piano/organ, none of my granddaughters are musically-inclined. I just have a fierce imagination. Perhaps my great-granddaughters will oblige! Thanks for your lovely thoughts.

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