First Recital

Cherubic face focused intently on her task
Nervous tongue flicking across dry lips
Her tiny hands leaping across the keys
While her feet dangled above the pedals.

Her tulle-faced dress meticulously sewn
Bright patent leather-strapped shiny sandals
Pink socks with white lace carefully folded over
Long blonde braids secured with small satin bows.

The ornamental piece was flawlessly performed
Obligatory bow taken, quickly she dashed away
Embarrassed, it seemed, to have the attention
My six-year-old granddaughter’s first recital.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Wolf Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 5:22 PM
So adorable. I just can picture it so well from the exquisite poetic details you have penned. Sweet as sugar. Enjoy! Light and Love, Gershon
Hankins Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 7:03 PM
Thanks again, Gershon. I truly enjoyed penning this piece.
Mcintosh Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 7:41 PM
Gorgeous. I'm sure she was amazing! God bless you always with love, Gina - Ooops... I see this was fiction from your last comment! Excellent rendition!
Hankins Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 7:56 PM
Yep, not my granddaughter. However, to my credit, I taught piano for many years and suffered through many, many recitals. I have observed this scene more times than I can count. They were all rousing successes!!!
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 10:24 AM
- A beautiful picture of your granddaughter ... I can see her ... I guess you is very proud of her :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hankins Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 10:42 AM
Time for confession. I have three beautiful granddaughters and though I play piano/organ, none of my granddaughters are musically-inclined. I just have a fierce imagination. Perhaps my great-granddaughters will oblige! Thanks for your lovely thoughts.
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