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First Night

shy new bride, blushes ride, wants to hide, face beside palms spread wide. in comes groom, hearts in bloom, in their room, lovers loom…. out we zoom! 1st Placement Written 12/Jan/ 2022 New Poetry contest Joseph May sponsored 3 syllables each line two stanzas with aaaaa rhyme and bbbbb rhyme

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Date: 1/19/2022 6:53:00 AM
This was delightful, Krish! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/19/2022 7:16:00 AM
Thanks Kim! Delighted to hear from you!:)
Date: 1/17/2022 9:14:00 PM
The poem, 'First Night' is beautifully written in this new style. Congratulations!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/18/2022 3:11:00 AM
Thanks Christuraj!! Very interesting way to write a poem!
Date: 1/17/2022 10:41:00 AM
Very nicely penned Krish, Congrats on your win..
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/17/2022 11:42:00 AM
Thanks Joseph!:) Absolutely delighted with my placement! Thanks for the new contest theme!
Date: 1/12/2022 3:56:00 AM
- A sweet first night, best wishes in the contest Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/12/2022 4:58:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise! How wonderful is that night!!

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