First Moon

first moon over the harvested field--- sudden hush

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/10/2012 12:30:00 PM

Just dropping by to say hi and thank you! Wonderful haiku here, kash! I really liked your end line here. Thank you so much for passing by, that was really nice of you to say! I hope all is well with you!

Terry L. Allen

Date: 5/17/2012 2:46:00 PM

The short reprieve of dusk brilliant. Huggs TLee

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/8/2012 3:18:00 AM

Wonderful... Terry

Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/7/2012 2:41:00 PM

I love Haiku poems,, have wrote a few,, have posted none. I so enjoy your words ;} have a great day !

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/6/2012 10:29:00 AM

Nice imagination penned with few words, enjoyed. Loved always, bl

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/4/2012 2:18:00 PM

a beautiful image Kash, hope you are doing okay :) Wilma

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/4/2012 11:50:00 AM

5/4/3???

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 5/4/2012 7:59:00 AM

You have sketched a very pleasing and beautiful image Kash. Beautiful Haiku. Love and best wishes....Ravindra

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/3/2012 1:24:00 PM

I haven't attempted the Haiku forms of poetry yet. I've read several and I like what I see here...great imagery!! BTW, it was indeed a pleasure to see your presence on my page.

John Loving Iii
Date: 5/4/2012 11:51:00 AM

look it up and do it the right way. 5/7/5

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/3/2012 11:58:00 AM

"Mr.King - Haiku" - Lovely ! - oxox Anne-Lise

Ann Roske

Date: 5/3/2012 11:32:00 AM

Beautiful image Kash - well done.