Kash Poet Poet Pantoum

First Love Letter Rediscovered

My first ever love letter
written so many years before,
a letter that was never delivered
rediscovered from my book store.

Written so many years before
now just a faded envelope,
rediscovered from my book store
a letter of passion and hope.

Now just a faded envelope
remembrance of my sweet honey days,
a letter of passion and hope
romance for my first love Goddess.

Remembrance of my sweet honey days
worshipping her beautiful face,
romance for my first love Goddess
never delivered for lack of courage.

Worshipping her beautiful face
lines that rekindle my passion,
never delivered for lack of courage
can be used for current love session.

Lines that rekindle my passion
passion of first burning love,
can be used for current love session
to please my wife--my dove.

Passion of first burning love
needs a little bit of edit,
to please my wife--my dove
before my Honey discovers it!

Needs a little bit of edit
a letter that was never delivered,
before my Honey discovers it
my first ever love letter.


© kashinath karmakar (12th June 2011)
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Placement: 2nd :(July 2011)

Contest:Yard Sale

Sponsor:Paula Swanson

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Sharon Well July 8, 2011 at 10:40 PM Great poetry in beautiful words! congrats.

Carol Sunshine Brown July 5, 2011 at 4:53 AM Congratulations on your win Kashinath in Paula's "Yard Sale" contest. Love, Carol

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer July 3, 2011 at 10:10 AM Beautiful~Congrats. to you!

Ralph Taylor July 3, 2011 at 9:47 AM Congrats on your 2nd Place win, Kashi. Excellent piece. Nice going. Have a great Fourth. Ralph

Nette Onclaud July 3, 2011 at 8:16 AM a real winner, this one kashi... whooping congrats with huggs!

Joyce Johnson July 2, 2011 at 7:56 PM Congratulations on your big win with this lovely pantounm. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 2, 2011 at 7:29 PM Congrats Kash on your dynamic win luv with this touching entry my friend.. way to go my friend..aesome luv..

Elizabeth Wesley June 26, 2011 at 4:44 PM Romantic and tender, so glad I stopped by to read.

Kash Poet June 14, 2011 at 3:51 AM Thanks everyone for the comments...NOW this is not my story!!!

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2011 at 10:49 PM hahahaha. needs a little bit of edit. that is choice, Kash. LOVE it. You are becoming King of the Pantoum!!!

Wilma Neels June 13, 2011 at 10:48 AM Kash, can I tell your wife? Promise I will do it in a gentle way ;) hehe just kidding, I love this form but I have never tried it.. You do it so brilliantly ;)

Nette Onclaud June 13, 2011 at 7:50 AM kashi, you funny scoundrel!! love the mystery of secrery; amazing! visit me?? :) hugggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 12, 2011 at 3:43 PM wow what an emotional expression of beauty and luv Kash.. tremendous language invigorates this piece and pure essence of luv.. words are super powerful my friend.. enjoyed and thankxx for your sympathies on my loss of Bronco .. my heart is in pain but he is in peace on angelic wings luv..

Carolyn Devonshire June 12, 2011 at 10:44 AM Ah, I imagine your wife might be upset if she read a love letter to another woman, Kash, but surely enough time has passed to alleviate the jealousy. Wonder what would have happened if you had delivered it as you first intended? Lovely poem, dear friend. I still have the first "break up" letter a guy handed me. He was too timid to tell me face-to-face. It reminds me how fickle love can be. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico June 12, 2011 at 10:23 AM LOL, secret is safe here my friend.... Every write on a past lady (which seems to be a trend) I need to explain to my wife... so enjoyed you work today,.Michael

Kash Poet June 12, 2011 at 9:29 AM SHHH....don't tell my wife!