First Love Letter Rediscovered

My first ever love letter written so many years before, a letter that was never delivered rediscovered from my book store. Written so many years before now just a faded envelope, rediscovered from my book store a letter of passion and hope. Now just a faded envelope remembrance of my sweet honey days, a letter of passion and hope romance for my first love Goddess. Remembrance of my sweet honey days worshipping her beautiful face, romance for my first love Goddess never delivered for lack of courage. Worshipping her beautiful face lines that rekindle my passion, never delivered for lack of courage can be used for current love session. Lines that rekindle my passion passion of first burning love, can be used for current love session to please my wife--my dove. Passion of first burning love needs a little bit of edit, to please my wife--my dove before my Honey discovers it! Needs a little bit of edit a letter that was never delivered, before my Honey discovers it my first ever love letter. © kashinath karmakar (12th June 2011) ============000============== Placement: 2nd :(July 2011) Contest:Yard Sale Sponsor:Paula Swanson

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Date: 7/8/2011 10:40:00 PM
Great poetry in beautiful words! congrats.
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Date: 7/5/2011 4:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Kashinath in Paula's "Yard Sale" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/3/2011 10:10:00 AM
Beautiful~Congrats. to you!
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Date: 7/3/2011 9:47:00 AM
Congrats on your 2nd Place win, Kashi. Excellent piece. Nice going. Have a great Fourth. Ralph
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Date: 7/3/2011 8:16:00 AM
a real winner, this one kashi... whooping congrats with huggs!
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Date: 7/2/2011 7:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win with this lovely pantounm. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/2/2011 7:29:00 PM
Congrats Kash on your dynamic win luv with this touching entry my friend.. way to go my friend..aesome luv..
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Date: 6/26/2011 4:44:00 PM
Romantic and tender, so glad I stopped by to read.
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Date: 6/14/2011 3:51:00 AM
Thanks everyone for the comments...NOW this is not my story!!!
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Date: 6/13/2011 10:49:00 PM
hahahaha. needs a little bit of edit. that is choice, Kash. LOVE it. You are becoming King of the Pantoum!!!
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Date: 6/13/2011 10:48:00 AM
Kash, can I tell your wife? Promise I will do it in a gentle way ;) hehe just kidding, I love this form but I have never tried it.. You do it so brilliantly ;)
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Date: 6/13/2011 7:50:00 AM
kashi, you funny scoundrel!! love the mystery of secrery; amazing! visit me?? :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 6/12/2011 3:43:00 PM
wow what an emotional expression of beauty and luv Kash.. tremendous language invigorates this piece and pure essence of luv.. words are super powerful my friend.. enjoyed and thankxx for your sympathies on my loss of Bronco .. my heart is in pain but he is in peace on angelic wings luv..
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Date: 6/12/2011 10:44:00 AM
Ah, I imagine your wife might be upset if she read a love letter to another woman, Kash, but surely enough time has passed to alleviate the jealousy. Wonder what would have happened if you had delivered it as you first intended? Lovely poem, dear friend. I still have the first "break up" letter a guy handed me. He was too timid to tell me face-to-face. It reminds me how fickle love can be. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/12/2011 10:23:00 AM
LOL, secret is safe here my friend.... Every write on a past lady (which seems to be a trend) I need to explain to my wife... so enjoyed you work today,.Michael
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Date: 6/12/2011 9:29:00 AM
SHHH....don't tell my wife!
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