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First Love

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red roses bloom on her ivory cheeks love is in the air 1st June 2016

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Michelle Corbin
Date: 7/28/2016 4:32:00 AM
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This was so cute!
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2016 6:54:00 AM
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Thanks Michelle:-) hugs Jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/5/2016 10:25:00 AM
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She is why I am now heartless :( romantic poem Jan!
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2016 6:54:00 AM
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OOps I missed replying:-( thanks Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paul Callus
Date: 6/2/2016 12:44:00 PM
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Awww! so romantic! Yes...'love is in the air' even though in the visual 'air is in the love'! hugs // paul
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2016 2:41:00 PM
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Love that comment thanks Paul:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Cottrell
Date: 6/2/2016 9:13:00 AM
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Very nice Haiku. Great work.
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2016 2:41:00 PM
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Thanks James:-) hugs Jan xx
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Red Fiery
Date: 6/2/2016 1:57:00 AM
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It's good to feel love and passion...I have given up on Love !!! I still write about love though...honestly speaking, this is an outstanding work !!!! Cheers ~Red~
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2016 7:57:00 AM
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Never give up hope Red - you never know what or who is around the next corner:-) hugs Jan xx
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 6/2/2016 12:53:00 AM
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The pic portrays the poem well, JAN, lovely poem, enjoy the read.........A.M.
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2016 7:57:00 AM
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Thanks so much Afolabi:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mama Bear
Date: 6/1/2016 9:16:00 PM
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Ah young love how lovely Very nice. Hugs Edith
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2016 7:58:00 AM
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'Old' love isn't bad too either Mama bear lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Robert Heemstra
Date: 6/1/2016 9:14:00 PM
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Red red red roses! When I first met my wife I had 3 long stem roses for her! Very nice write Jan! I have been sleeping better on the new bed!
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2016 7:59:00 AM
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We celebrate our silver anniversary this year and my hubby has never given me red roses - if he did it now I would be worried lol :-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/1/2016 8:45:00 PM
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Another 7, Jan! Janice
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2016 7:59:00 AM
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Thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/1/2016 5:53:00 PM
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this is sweet. For any contest? love the ivory cheeks!!
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2016 6:09:00 PM
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No just a write for fun:-) Was really pleased with the way it turned out not like me to write mushy romantic poems lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/1/2016 4:34:00 PM
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So sweet and romantic Jan, nothing like being in love..... Hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2016 4:36:00 PM
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Thanks Cecilia:-) hugs jan xx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 6/1/2016 1:54:00 PM
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this is delightful, jan! so simple yet so perfect...
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2016 2:44:00 PM
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Thanks Ilene:-) short and sweet:-):-) hugs jan xx
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 6/1/2016 12:47:00 PM
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this makes me sigh, jan... charmed!..huggs
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2016 12:57:00 PM
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Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/1/2016 12:08:00 PM
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Wow! i missed earlier perhaps. Lol, now a days my heart smiles boo boo. Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2016 12:10:00 PM
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Thanks BL:-) hugs Jan xx
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/1/2016 7:59:00 AM
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aww... sweet <3 <3
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2016 8:08:00 AM
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Thanks Cas:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/1/2016 7:52:00 AM
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Very sweet Jan
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2016 8:08:00 AM
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Thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

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