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red roses bloom on her ivory cheeks love is in the air 1st June 2016

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Michelle Corbin

Date: 7/28/2016 4:32:00 AM

This was so cute!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2016 6:54:00 AM

Thanks Michelle:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/5/2016 10:25:00 AM

She is why I am now heartless :( romantic poem Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2016 6:54:00 AM

OOps I missed replying:-( thanks Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/2/2016 12:44:00 PM

Awww! so romantic! Yes...'love is in the air' even though in the visual 'air is in the love'! hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2016 2:41:00 PM

Love that comment thanks Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

James Cottrell

Date: 6/2/2016 9:13:00 AM

Very nice Haiku. Great work.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2016 2:41:00 PM

Thanks James:-) hugs Jan xx

Red Fiery

Date: 6/2/2016 1:57:00 AM

It's good to feel love and passion...I have given up on Love !!! I still write about love though...honestly speaking, this is an outstanding work !!!! Cheers ~Red~

Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2016 7:57:00 AM

Never give up hope Red - you never know what or who is around the next corner:-) hugs Jan xx

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/2/2016 12:53:00 AM

The pic portrays the poem well, JAN, lovely poem, enjoy the read.........A.M.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2016 7:57:00 AM

Thanks so much Afolabi:-) hugs Jan xx

Mama Bear

Date: 6/1/2016 9:16:00 PM

Ah young love how lovely Very nice. Hugs Edith

Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2016 7:58:00 AM

'Old' love isn't bad too either Mama bear lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Heemstra

Date: 6/1/2016 9:14:00 PM

Red red red roses! When I first met my wife I had 3 long stem roses for her! Very nice write Jan! I have been sleeping better on the new bed!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2016 7:59:00 AM

We celebrate our silver anniversary this year and my hubby has never given me red roses - if he did it now I would be worried lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/1/2016 8:45:00 PM

Another 7, Jan! Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2016 7:59:00 AM

Thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2016 5:53:00 PM

this is sweet. For any contest? love the ivory cheeks!!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2016 6:09:00 PM

No just a write for fun:-) Was really pleased with the way it turned out not like me to write mushy romantic poems lol:-) hugs jan xx

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 6/1/2016 4:34:00 PM

So sweet and romantic Jan, nothing like being in love..... Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2016 4:36:00 PM

Thanks Cecilia:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/1/2016 1:54:00 PM

this is delightful, jan! so simple yet so perfect...

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2016 2:44:00 PM

Thanks Ilene:-) short and sweet:-):-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/1/2016 12:47:00 PM

this makes me sigh, jan... charmed!..huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2016 12:57:00 PM

Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/1/2016 12:08:00 PM

Wow! i missed earlier perhaps. Lol, now a days my heart smiles boo boo. Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2016 12:10:00 PM

Thanks BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/1/2016 7:59:00 AM

aww... sweet <3 <3

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2016 8:08:00 AM

Thanks Cas:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 6/1/2016 7:52:00 AM

Very sweet Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 6/1/2016 8:08:00 AM

Thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx