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First Love

There was a garden of desire Wherein bloomed my first love. The thought of it sets me afire. I sense it was conceived above. She was young, and so was I. We were late to love’s lure. I felt without her I would die. She felt the same, sweetly pure. We quickly learned to act out In embrace, kiss, and, more The ecstasies on love’s route. Hence love forever we swore. But we were spring-garden green, Too young to flower for years. Still her memory bears a bright sheen That lights my fire with rooted tears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/30/2014 7:23:00 AM
Lovely memories recollected in tranquility. Happy New Year, Paul
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 12/30/2014 12:13:00 PM
Thank you, Dr. Mehta. Your kind words are sincerely appreciated—and valued. I hope you and your loved ones will have a healthy, happy 2015.
Date: 12/30/2014 5:25:00 AM
What tender memories of a first love Paul - beautifully penned my friend:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2014 12:19:00 PM
I have received such support since i started writing earlier this year Paul - I love reading the work of others that is how I have grown so much in my writing and in my confidence:-) Have a great New year:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 12/30/2014 12:15:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. You have a marvelous way of building one's self-esteem. Please know of my gratitude. All the best in 2015.

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