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The way you looked back,smiled at me a smile behind which I could see hints of a love that'll bloom one day and now it lights up all my way if love at first sight what they say is like this love that blown away everything that comes on its way then now I'm ready for the play will you become that jasmine tree? I will be there like honey bee! 26th July 2012

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Date: 5/5/2011 7:02:00 AM
lol, I am telling your boss about this write of your unless you organize me a vacation for me as well :) Good luck for the contest Kash ;)
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Date: 5/4/2011 9:30:00 PM
soupmail
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Date: 5/4/2011 6:56:00 PM
Wish you all the best , kashinath. I had just mine.
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Date: 5/4/2011 4:54:00 PM
Everyone needs a vacation, Kash. Keep the cell phone off when you deserve a break. It's amazing, but a real world exists outside of cyberspace. I am not visiting the Soup much for health reasons, dear friend. Just be assured I think highly of you as a person as well as a poet! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/4/2011 2:19:00 PM
LOL Yes, it's a sweet feeling, isn't it? : )
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Date: 5/4/2011 2:03:00 PM
Good one, Kash, there is NO time for the boss when you are on vacation. I really liked the third one with its sweet imagery. Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/4/2011 12:29:00 PM
A good write to relate to.........George
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