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First Love

He spoke to me in a loving way, I wanted to reply, yet not a word I could say Blinding me like a bright summers light, His eyes met mine, I knew I was up for the fight. My palms were sweating, My face felt hot, My heart was racing, These feeling were like a battle, A battle I hadn't yet fought. To me, He was the most beautiful song that I'd ever heard Yet in the lyrics I didn't know a word. He'd brightened the room, making me see That all I wanted was him and me...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/20/2009 4:15:00 PM
you went deep in this one nice poem
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Date: 6/19/2009 11:58:00 AM
Lovely poem Charlotte>>James
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Date: 6/15/2009 10:31:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww*.* You are Going to My Favs:p HAHAHA Obviously:D
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Date: 6/15/2009 9:41:00 AM
Thank you for your comment.i enjoyed reading this because i love love poems.really nice
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Date: 6/15/2009 9:26:00 AM
funny, i mean romantic... love has a way of getting our attention. keep writing buddy. you are great!
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