First Love

He spoke to me in a loving way,
	            I wanted to reply, yet not a word I could say
Blinding me like a bright summers light,
	            His eyes met mine, I knew I was up for the fight.



My palms were sweating, 
My face felt hot,
My heart was racing,
                              These feeling were like a battle,
	              A battle I hadn't yet fought.


To me,
He was the most beautiful song that I'd ever heard
Yet in the lyrics I didn't know a word.



                                He'd brightened the room, making me see 
	                    That all I wanted was him and me...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bess Avatar
June 20, 2009 at 4:15 PM
you went deep in this one nice poem
Fraser Avatar
June 19, 2009 at 11:58 AM
Lovely poem Charlotte>>James
Al-Riyami Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 10:31 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww*.* You are Going to My Favs:p HAHAHA Obviously:D
Quainoo Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 9:41 AM
Thank you for your comment.i enjoyed reading this because i love love poems.really nice
Adeite Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 9:26 AM
funny, i mean romantic... love has a way of getting our attention. keep writing buddy. you are great!
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