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First Love

Young lovers gazed with hearts ablaze
Passions stirred without a word
How sweet the wine when love was mine

            Daniel Turner
11/22/2023

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Lisa Ricci

December 5, 2023 at 3:09 AM

Hello Daniel. Good Morning. Well of course with a title such as this I had to turn the page (smile). This is adorable and yes beautiful. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent and love the heartbeat of poetry. Have a wonderful morning and day. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)

Daniel Turner

December 6, 2023 at 2:15 PM

Thank you, Lisa. So good to see you again. I hope life is treating you kindly:)

Ink Empress

November 29, 2023 at 1:44 PM

I love the internal rhymes here and the emotions expressed in such eloquence and in a seamless manner .. sometimes some feelings are deeper than words too. The last line sums up the poem so perfectly, pleasure reading this. Congratulations on your win. Well deserved.

Daniel Turner

November 29, 2023 at 1:50 PM

Thank you, young lady. I appreciate the flowers of kindness and your support:)

Valsa George

November 29, 2023 at 6:13 AM

Beautiful poem...dear Daniel... so sweet with love. A real slice of life....! First love is intoxicating as wine. All the Best in the contest.

Daniel Turner

November 29, 2023 at 1:49 PM

Thank you, Valsa. Great to see you again. I really appreciate your support:)

Linda Alice Fowler

November 27, 2023 at 6:59 AM

Sweet my friend. :)

Daniel Turner

November 27, 2023 at 9:51 AM

Thank you, Alice:)

Kim Rodrigues

November 25, 2023 at 5:45 AM

Great!

Daniel Turner

November 25, 2023 at 6:01 AM

Thank you, Kim:)

Charles Messina

November 24, 2023 at 3:49 PM

I too, still frequently see my first love...okay, she was a fishing pole, but hey, she was reely fine (lol) Very nice, Dan.

Daniel Turner

November 24, 2023 at 4:44 PM

Thanks Charlie:) Since you put it like that, I suppose my first love was baseball. Take care my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

November 24, 2023 at 4:34 AM

you got me poetizing lol

Daniel Turner

November 24, 2023 at 4:42 PM

Feel free to add on if you like Rose. You know I don't mind. It is always my pleasure when you drop by. Stay safe and take care sweet lady:)

Mystic Rose Rose

November 24, 2023 at 4:33 AM

First Love Young lovers gaze with hearts ablaze Passions stir without a word How sweet the wine when love was mine Kisses fired by love's own branding Unruly shivers down my spine How hungerly we loved, that very first time :)