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First Love

Young lovers gazed with hearts ablaze Passions stirred without a word How sweet the wine when love was mine Daniel Turner 11/22/2023

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 12/5/2023 3:09:00 AM

Hello Daniel. Good Morning. Well of course with a title such as this I had to turn the page (smile). This is adorable and yes beautiful. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent and love the heartbeat of poetry. Have a wonderful morning and day. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)

Daniel Turner
Date: 12/6/2023 2:15:00 PM

Thank you, Lisa. So good to see you again. I hope life is treating you kindly:)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 11/29/2023 4:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win, Daniel. A lovely verse.

Daniel Turner
Date: 11/29/2023 4:16:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra. I appreciate your time and support. I rarely win so it is a thrill:)

Ink Empress

Date: 11/29/2023 1:44:00 PM

I love the internal rhymes here and the emotions expressed in such eloquence and in a seamless manner .. sometimes some feelings are deeper than words too. The last line sums up the poem so perfectly, pleasure reading this. Congratulations on your win. Well deserved.

Daniel Turner
Date: 11/29/2023 1:50:00 PM

Thank you, young lady. I appreciate the flowers of kindness and your support:)

Valsa George

Date: 11/29/2023 6:13:00 AM

Beautiful poem...dear Daniel... so sweet with love. A real slice of life....! First love is intoxicating as wine. All the Best in the contest.

Daniel Turner
Date: 11/29/2023 1:49:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa. Great to see you again. I really appreciate your support:)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/27/2023 6:59:00 AM

Sweet my friend. :)

Daniel Turner
Date: 11/27/2023 9:51:00 AM

Thank you, Alice:)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/25/2023 5:45:00 AM

Great!

Daniel Turner
Date: 11/25/2023 6:01:00 AM

Thank you, Kim:)

Charles Messina

Date: 11/24/2023 3:49:00 PM

I too, still frequently see my first love...okay, she was a fishing pole, but hey, she was reely fine (lol) Very nice, Dan.

Daniel Turner
Date: 11/24/2023 4:44:00 PM

Thanks Charlie:) Since you put it like that, I suppose my first love was baseball. Take care my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/24/2023 4:34:00 AM

you got me poetizing lol

Daniel Turner
Date: 11/24/2023 4:42:00 PM

Feel free to add on if you like Rose. You know I don't mind. It is always my pleasure when you drop by. Stay safe and take care sweet lady:)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/24/2023 4:33:00 AM

First Love Young lovers gaze with hearts ablaze Passions stir without a word How sweet the wine when love was mine Kisses fired by love's own branding Unruly shivers down my spine How hungerly we loved, that very first time :)