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First Love (2002)

Fading in Fading out Waves that come When there's no doubt That love is near And suns are close You feel the one You need the most Its all about Even though Stood on shore Waves to toes Under amber skies Touching seas of blue All I'm thinking is: Why not with you?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/30/2009 2:32:00 PM
It never goes away.nice work.
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Date: 8/16/2009 3:55:00 PM
Thanx!
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Date: 8/13/2009 7:15:00 AM
excellent writ......
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Date: 7/5/2009 11:48:00 PM
Amazing write! - eddie
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Date: 7/2/2009 6:56:00 PM
Splendid work, Naomi or is it C.W. ?
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Date: 6/22/2009 7:02:00 PM
concise but you hit the thought..good one!
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