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First Love,Free Of

*I've read so many amazing poems since my return to Poetry Soup. I've been inspired to try more structured poetry, and explore different types. Here's my first try at a footle.* Adore Need more --Part not --Heart caught Time spent Love lent --Touch soul --Feel whole Wonder lust No trust. --Don't go --Tears flow You leave I plead. --Love lost --The cost Awoke Heart Broke --I Cry --Goodbye First love Free of.

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Date: 2/7/2016 1:38:00 PM
GOOD POEM
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Date: 10/1/2013 4:30:00 PM
Powerful and to the point.
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Date: 9/7/2013 10:27:00 AM
love these Rachel, "wonder lust, no trust, wow that bites, but oh can be so true...
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Date: 8/31/2013 3:03:00 PM
- And you did it so good, Rachel !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/22/2013 8:50:00 PM
Original and pure footle! Rachel! I love it! jimbo
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