First Love,Free Of

*I've read so many amazing poems since my return to Poetry Soup. I've been inspired to try more structured poetry, and explore different types. Here's my first try at a footle.*


Adore
Need more

--Part not
--Heart caught

Time spent
Love lent

--Touch soul
--Feel whole

Wonder lust
No trust.

--Don't go
--Tears flow

You leave
I plead.

--Love lost
--The cost

Awoke
Heart Broke

--I Cry
--Goodbye

First love
Free of.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 1:38 PM
GOOD POEM
Ligon Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 4:30 PM
Powerful and to the point.
Horsman Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 10:27 AM
love these Rachel, "wonder lust, no trust, wow that bites, but oh can be so true...
Andresen Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 3:03 PM
- And you did it so good, Rachel !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Goff Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 8:50 PM
Original and pure footle! Rachel! I love it! jimbo
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