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First Kiss

Steaming, sweaty as lips meet, passion is forever theirs, tingeling from head to toe, the very first kiss.

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Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/24/2011 1:35:00 PM

Hello Susan, Ahhh, so beautiful, Congratulations on your win hon, this is wonderful. As Always, SHsr

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/23/2011 4:20:00 PM

Susan~A late Congratulation~ on your win in Michael's hot contest,..p.d.

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/23/2011 2:05:00 PM

Love this Susan, well done on your win:))

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/23/2011 8:28:00 AM

Congratulations Susan, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Michael. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/22/2011 7:19:00 PM

You have described a good time very well with your words. Congratulations on your win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2011 3:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2011 1:31:00 PM

Really nice, Susan, Congratulations to you.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/22/2011 9:44:00 AM

yes to this, susan... fired up! CONGRATS on the win!! :) huggs, nette

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/22/2011 9:36:00 AM

Hey Susan, congratulations on your win in MF's contest ;-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/22/2011 6:15:00 AM

Congrats Susan on your super win in the Spicy for ladies only contest with this wonderful write and win luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/22/2011 6:09:00 AM

A very sweet and tender write..Congrats my dear...luv Michael

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/22/2011 6:06:00 AM

Hi Susan - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "SPICY" contest. Best wishes, KC

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2011 10:28:00 PM

AHH, I love first kisses and first kiss poems like this. Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/2/2011 5:46:00 PM

Nice feelings of the first kiss well worded, susan