First Generation

From the first generation came
our strength.  Theirs was
the legacy the second generation
relinquished, too heavy

to own, and we, the third,
watchers and assessors of
these coldest moons and nights
the stars refused to illuminate,

saw the comets take a nose dive
down black holes our compass struck
a truce on.  Strange loyalties
seduce us, thumbs-up, thumbs-down.

It's so capricious a matter
that Caligula's our friend
with his chain snake-looping
the darkness, nailing us.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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March 26, 2009 at 10:07 AM
Thumbs up on this one, oh, gladiator. Do I understand you aright? "Strange loyalties seduce us." Even if I've missed the rest, the above rings so true. BIG LOVE, daver
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