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Such a vast array of things I could tell you Sometimes I don't know where to begin How beautiful you are? How incredible your smile? How my knees become weak when you sing? Tell me about what you're thinking To help my focus narrow Then I'll tell you what's lodged Down deep in my heart For you and you only to know

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Vickey Rhymer

Date: 1/6/2023 7:37:00 PM

The thoughts of a man are as deep waters the discerning man(woman) draws them out.Whether you or those you allow do the drawing these words of the bible holds true.Proverbs 20:5.It takes discernment To know is this the time to speak,to safely draw up the long submerged lest you suffer a case of the bends.Anyway that is what your poem brought to this mind.Thanks for providing this moment Of meditation.

Andres Luis Bigote
Date: 1/17/2023 1:44:00 AM

You're welcome