Get Your Premium Membership

First Decoration of the Season

The beautiful wreath hangs upon the door, Upon the door to greet all. All who see it will have to smile, Smile as they recall. Recall how festive the season will be, Will be for one and all. All it took was a wreath on a door, A wreath on a door in the hall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/11/2011 9:18:00 PM
I like the way you have taken one word from each line, and used it in the next line. You have simple and easy to read wording that yields quite a bit of descriptiveness.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/5/2011 4:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 1/5/2011 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Francine in the "Christmas Wreath" contest by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 1/5/2011 8:25:00 AM
Hi . Heartiest congratulations on your success with this fine piece. Eamon
Login to Reply
Date: 1/5/2011 6:24:00 AM
Terrific words, Francine. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Login to Reply
Date: 1/4/2011 10:10:00 PM
Many Congrats Francine for clinching big win spot in this difficult yet interesting form of Dr Rams contest. Best wishes/Luv...Hitendra Mehta
Login to Reply
Date: 1/4/2011 5:04:00 AM
Great write Francine, congratulations to you, love Wilma
Login to Reply
Date: 1/3/2011 9:49:00 PM
this one is very short and cute. Congratulations, Francine. I much enjoyed this. LUv, Andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 1/3/2011 7:25:00 PM
very nicelwritten and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 1/3/2011 5:49:00 PM
Congratulations Francine on a worthy poem's place. And Happy Birthday, I believe is in order! "Many More!" Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 1/3/2011 5:37:00 PM
So happy to see you in the winners' circle, Francine! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 1/3/2011 4:10:00 PM
Congrats Francine on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's wreath contest with this lovely entry my friend.. enjoy your top ten success tonight with luv...
Login to Reply
Date: 1/3/2011 3:42:00 PM
Congratulations , Francine, on the tenth place in my contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/5/2010 3:19:00 PM
Thank you for comment to my poem. Your poem is nice.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/4/2010 1:31:00 PM
Lovely piece Francine.. good luck in Dr. Ram's contest.. a terrific challenge which u have met ... see your contest is almost filled for one more entry.. good luck ... if u need help just ask me.. be happy to help u out if necessary... good response to your first adventure my friend.. enjoy..with luv.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/4/2010 11:39:00 AM
Francine, I think you can still enter this one. See Dr. Ram's latest blog. My original "wreath" poem didn't have the continuing words (and I don't think he had a problem with that), but he told me to shorten it to eight lines. Thanks for your kind words. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 12/4/2010 9:31:00 AM
A beautiful welcoming sight is a Pine Wreath at Christmas. Good luck in the contest Francine >> James :)
Login to Reply
Date: 12/4/2010 6:17:00 AM
You rose so well to this challenge, Francine, and you did it perfectly to meet Dr. Ram's requirements. Your poem shows how the holiday wreath brings joy to your visitors. I think this is just what Dr. Ram wants to see and it made me smile to read it. Thanks for your comment on mine. I had to change it to fit the contest. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 12/3/2010 11:31:00 AM
Francine, this is really enchanting and lovely, simple yet full of images of the wreath on the door in the hall.. best of luck in the contest~~
Login to Reply
Date: 12/3/2010 10:54:00 AM
Excellent. Enjoyed reading your poetry today Francine. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 12/3/2010 7:43:00 AM
Thanks for the alert. I posted it and failed to enter the contest. Have done it now. Thanks. This has happened many times.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/3/2010 7:38:00 AM
Soup mail
Login to Reply
Date: 12/2/2010 9:53:00 PM
a flowing, beautiful scene francine.. good luck in the contest! warmest, nette
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry