First Day of Fall

fall entered with grace
gentle were her breezes
sun filled were her skies


Sept 22, 2008
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Guzzi Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 8:05 AM
What you have written is wonderful personification. [the leaves fall/ from the maple tree -- a gentle breeze] present tense, objective, personification not used ..haiku Light & Love
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October 26, 2012 at 2:59 AM
Well done Cynthia - oxox Anne-Lise :)
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October 26, 2012 at 12:53 AM
Good imagery.Why not in present tense?
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