First Date......Footle Series Ps

Won't bite
Invite


Oh-oh,
No Dough


Poor Bob
Needs Job


Sling Hash
For Cash


Hooray
Big Day


First Kiss
Pure Bliss

Written by Grandma and Jordan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kelly Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 11:16 AM
Dang , dang, dang , I missed this one Barbara . Well done to the 3 of you . A blessed trinity !!! Big Crush ....... Don't Blush .... !!
Iloduba Jnr Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 5:57 PM
I bet i know where u re coming from now.cheers!
Esquire Avatar
September 3, 2009 at 11:50 AM
My Dearest Barbara, Barbeeg, I see another POET on the rise in the Gorlick Family Great write Jordan has a great Mentor LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER...HARRY
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August 23, 2009 at 12:33 PM
Got a good chuckle out of this one. What a way to bring back footles back with creativity and flair. Good use of humor. Thank Grandma and Jordan for this day brightener. Karen
Brown Avatar
August 23, 2009 at 8:41 AM
Excellent. Time well spent with Jordan. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 9:13 PM
Really funny, Barbara! So glad the first date ended with a "pure bliss kiss." Love, Carolyn
Golden Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 4:52 PM
Ahhhhh....the return of the footle! I like it! Donna
Fraser Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 2:24 PM
Oh Barbara, you made me chuckle with this one, its koolio>>James
Kendrick Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 2:20 PM
Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara
Freeman Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 1:44 PM
Just beautiful, Lady, Sincerely Moses
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