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First Date Footles

Blind date Can’t wait He’s here I cheer Nice Smile Got style Blue eyes Toned thighs Handsome Nice bum Great food Good mood Drink wine Feel fine Hold hands On sands First kiss Is bliss Next date At eight 19th August 2014

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Jcb Brul

Date: 1/31/2021 10:38:00 PM

This is so good Jan...I will try to do footles that rhyme next time...Congratulations..

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2021 11:16:00 AM

I applaud you for thinking out of the box with the footles, i wrote these in 2014 just a few months after i joined the site:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/31/2021 8:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Sounds like a great date. A wonderful read. Enjoy your win/day with blessings..................

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2021 11:15:00 AM

thanks Paula:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/30/2021 10:03:00 PM

Hi Jan, Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2021 11:15:00 AM

thanks Alexis:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 11/30/2014 2:58:00 PM

Love these Footles Jan, so much fun, James :)

James Fraser
Date: 11/30/2014 3:04:00 PM

I always go back to older poems of my fellow poets xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/30/2014 3:02:00 PM

Gosh these were written ages back James glad you have found them now my friend:-) hugs Jan xxx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/20/2014 2:02:00 PM

this is simply engaging, jan... love your set of footles.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2014 2:21:00 PM

Thanks nette I have had such fun writing them since Judy introduced them to me and now Andrea has her contest I can't stop footling about:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/19/2014 10:08:00 PM

Jan you have really caught on with this...great imagination. SuZ

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2014 1:54:00 AM

thanks for dropping by Suzanne:-) Hugs Jan xxx

John Lawless

Date: 8/19/2014 3:43:00 PM

Jan, nice to see you having some fun with these footles.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 3:55:00 PM

I am having so much fun John :-) thanks for dropping by hugs jan xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/19/2014 10:32:00 AM

I love reading you, Jan. You are one spunky lady. I hope you find the strength to deal with the issues you are going through, dear. Hugs...

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 3:54:00 PM

Thanks Eileen I find humour helps me through bad days:-) Hugs jan xxxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/19/2014 9:15:00 AM

God bless him my friend! Humour hides so much pain behind ! Hugs Jan !

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 9:36:00 AM

Its the way I cope with Life Dr Sharma:-) Hugs jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2014 8:30:00 AM

- Funny reading, Jan !! - Sweet dateing !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 8:32:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/19/2014 8:27:00 AM

What happened dear ? Why any strain? Trust all is well my friend !

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 8:29:00 AM

my dad has terminal cancer sometimes the reality of the situation really hits home that's why i try and write with humour most of the time:-) hugs jan xx