First Date Footles

Blind date
Can’t wait

He’s here
I cheer

Nice Smile
Got style

Blue eyes
Toned thighs

Handsome
Nice bum

Great food
Good mood

Drink wine
Feel fine

Hold hands
On sands

First kiss
Is bliss

Next date
At eight


19th August 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Brul Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 10:38 PM
This is so good Jan...I will try to do footles that rhyme next time...Congratulations..
Allison Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 11:16 AM
I applaud you for thinking out of the box with the footles, i wrote these in 2014 just a few months after i joined the site:-) hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 8:39 AM
Congratulations on your win. Sounds like a great date. A wonderful read. Enjoy your win/day with blessings..................
Allison Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 11:15 AM
thanks Paula:-) hugs jan xx
Y. Avatar
January 30, 2021 at 10:03 PM
Hi Jan, Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 11:15 AM
thanks Alexis:-) hugs jan xx
Fraser Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 2:58 PM
Love these Footles Jan, so much fun, James :)
Fraser Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 3:04 PM
I always go back to older poems of my fellow poets xx
Allison Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 3:02 PM
Gosh these were written ages back James glad you have found them now my friend:-) hugs Jan xxx
Onclaud Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 2:02 PM
this is simply engaging, jan... love your set of footles.. huggs
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 2:21 PM
Thanks nette I have had such fun writing them since Judy introduced them to me and now Andrea has her contest I can't stop footling about:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Delaney Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 10:08 PM
Jan you have really caught on with this...great imagination. SuZ
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:54 AM
thanks for dropping by Suzanne:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Lawless Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 3:43 PM
Jan, nice to see you having some fun with these footles.
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 3:55 PM
I am having so much fun John :-) thanks for dropping by hugs jan xxx
Manassian Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 10:32 AM
I love reading you, Jan. You are one spunky lady. I hope you find the strength to deal with the issues you are going through, dear. Hugs...
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 3:54 PM
Thanks Eileen I find humour helps me through bad days:-) Hugs jan xxxx
A. Sharma Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 9:15 AM
God bless him my friend! Humour hides so much pain behind ! Hugs Jan !
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 9:36 AM
Its the way I cope with Life Dr Sharma:-) Hugs jan xxx
Andresen Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:30 AM
- Funny reading, Jan !! - Sweet dateing !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:32 AM
Thanks for dropping by Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xxx
A. Sharma Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:27 AM
What happened dear ? Why any strain? Trust all is well my friend !
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:29 AM
my dad has terminal cancer sometimes the reality of the situation really hits home that's why i try and write with humour most of the time:-) hugs jan xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:26 AM
cute cute.. :D
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:28 AM
thanks for dropping by Olive was just having a bit of fun. Hugs jan x
A. Sharma Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:19 AM
Real fun Jan! U hv become a master in footles ! Hugs !
Smith Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:27 AM
Haha :)
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:25 AM
Aww thanks Dr Sharma i just need a bit of fun at the moment take me away from the strain of mum and dad:-( Hugs jan xxx
Smith Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:16 AM
No gas..... Make pass....beautiful Jan...... Hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:24 AM
No way ... no lay LOL Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx
Gorelick Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:12 AM
Nice that there was a "next date".. great series..! BG
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:23 AM
LOL Barbara a girl can dream:-) Hugs jan xx
Nance Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 7:23 AM
:) Fun ;) These are so cool. So much can be said in such little words :)
Nance Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 5:47 PM
LOL oh well your one brain cell is brilliant!
Smith Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 8:14 AM
Lol
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 7:26 AM
Means I dont have to think too hard Casarah - my one remaining brain cell is in danger t the moment LOL Hugs jan xxx
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