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First Date Poets Dozen Saw her beside me Eyes yearning desperately I fell instantly Perfume in hand I approached her ever so slowly Not moving too fast proceeding oh, so cautiously. After asado, and cinzano, then gelato, we took a stroll Parliamo piano, piano, love's flames started then ci vediamo Past heartbreaks revealed, nothing at all was concealed Talking quietly entranced, long, long, into the night Walking hand in hand hearts aglow with what we feel Our hearts had found their home, we just knew it was right My perception of her love's reflection, was to my heart's delight. *Asado= Argentine barbeque *Parliamo piano piano= we spoke slowly (Italian) *Ci vediamo= see you later, goodbye (Italian) First date was in Buenos Aires hence Spanish Italian references Most Portenos residents of Buenos Aires are of Italian/Spanish descent. December 24,2015 For Silent One contest First Date Poets dozen

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Date: 1/16/2016 7:21:00 PM
John, Congratulations on your "Poet's Dozen 2: First date" WIN!!! Love ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 1/9/2016 6:29:00 PM
Well done, John, and you made me very hungry. Congrats!
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/9/2016 6:40:00 PM
I'll start peeling the onions, John. haha
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/9/2016 6:33:00 PM
Thanks Lin Jumbalaya anyone?
Date: 1/9/2016 6:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poem and win. Joyce
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/9/2016 6:33:00 PM
Thanks Joyce so nice for you to comment.
Date: 1/9/2016 4:06:00 PM
John, I just love this, happy for you *smiles*
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/9/2016 6:32:00 PM
Thanks Laura so nice your visit and comment!
Date: 1/9/2016 3:38:00 PM
John, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/9/2016 6:31:00 PM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 1/9/2016 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, John, love your first date imagery.
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/9/2016 3:27:00 PM
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/9/2016 3:24:00 PM
Thanks Eve, everything was delicious, the ending even better!
Date: 1/9/2016 3:14:00 PM
I love your first date poem, John, that had a very happy ending! Congrats on your nice win. Sandra
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/9/2016 3:23:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, yeah 21 years and still going strong!
Date: 12/24/2015 12:30:00 PM
awww, John. Yours is so sweet. I'm glad you have so much happiness in your marriage.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/24/2015 1:37:00 PM
Thanks Lin, life is pretty good for sure, with Jah's blessing.
Date: 12/24/2015 11:57:00 AM
Rich and delectable food for the heart John! Mele Kalikimaka to you and yours! Blessings, Connie
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/24/2015 1:36:00 PM
Thanks Connie, what language is that and what does it mean?

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