first date

my girlfriends dad is so nice

sold me a canoe half price

but on our first date

we got home quite late

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Kyser Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 8:35 AM
Don't let that first outing rattle Time to get back in the saddle You might just have thunk He wanted you sunk But hey, he gave you a paddle!
Breese Avatar
September 29, 2022 at 8:35 PM
Haha. Good Jeff.
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