First Date - A

Our fingertips brush; a frisson passes 'tween us 'fore lips interlock.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2014 5:04:00 PM

Sweet ..thanks

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2014 6:40:00 PM

Very sweet!!! What will be B?

John Michaels
Date: 7/10/2014 3:39:00 AM

Maybe one day I'll reveal!! Thanks for stopping by!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/20/2014 11:43:00 PM

hehehe... I'm back here, do to the extra replies...LOL, Thank you John,....Linda

John Michaels
Date: 7/10/2014 3:39:00 AM

Right back at you, Linda!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 4:18:00 PM

Anytime John, thanks for the reply... I still remember my first date ..Linda

John Michaels
Date: 6/20/2014 5:35:00 AM

Indeed... the anxiety, the butterflies in the stomach and the excitement all wrapped up together!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 8:44:00 AM

John, , awesome haiku... Enjoyed the imagery..... Linda

John Michaels
Date: 6/9/2014 2:28:00 PM

Thanks, Linda. Glad you enjoyed it! This is one of those rare Haiku which jumped into my brain almost fully-formed (*almost*). Thanks for stopping by.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/6/2014 6:19:00 AM

Nice images for the first date, john

John Michaels
Date: 6/9/2014 2:29:00 PM

Thanks for great comments on so many of my poems. Really appreciate them!

Diane Christian

Date: 6/5/2014 6:34:00 AM

Aww first dates are always sweet. Thanks for your feed back on my poems. I am fine I júst carnt get in a relationship with some one who is alchohol dependant. Friends yes partners no. It dont work as the drink takes priority. Look forward to reading more of your work

John Michaels
Date: 6/20/2014 5:34:00 AM

Thanks, Diane. Glad you're doing okay...