fireworks hiku

horizon q u i v e r s b u r s t i n g forth dandelions ~ * fluorescent f i r e w o r k s * * * * ** * * * *

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/26/2025 9:06:00 PM

Wow, Ink. What a mellifluous poem, in short words!! <3

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/24/2025 7:08:00 AM

Your wonderful haiku poem delves into themes of metamorphosis, beauty, and the relationship between the routine and the exceptional, dear Ink. The picture of "dandelions" and "fluorescent fireworks" contrasts the natural world and man-made shows, instilling a feeling of awe and spontaneity. The term "horizon" implies infinite possibilities and viewpoints, yet the act of "bursting out" signifies an explosion of creativity or life. Warm hugs and best wishes for the event.

Anne Winter

Date: 5/24/2025 1:27:00 AM

Dear I E, I love this haiku! I can just imagine the fireworks right now! The way you've penned this haiku is beyond brilliant! Love it! Sending you love, Anne :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/23/2025 1:23:00 PM

What a creative "hiku" f i r e w o r k s write. I love the pretty f i r e w o r k s up in the night sky. Have a fun weekend writing away............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/23/2025 12:45:00 PM

- An airy and beautiful firework ... you are hooked on hiku, Ink :))) - hugs

Ink Empress
Date: 5/23/2025 12:59:00 PM

Thank you dear anne lise was watching fireworks from my terrace tonight, and that inspired this hiku. Appreciate your kind support truly