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fireworks show setting new year sky ablaze ~ dreams exploding submitted on August 7, 2018 for contest HAIKU CAPTCHA sponsored by HARRY HORSMAN - RANKED 8TH

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Date: 9/19/2018 5:55:00 PM
beautiful visuals line, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/19/2018 7:15:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.
Date: 9/18/2018 3:07:00 AM
Hi Line:) As an ex amateur fireworks manufacturer I can easily relate to your haiku and the colourful extravaganza! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/18/2018 8:53:00 AM
Awesome - close enough to an expert on the subject. Thank you so much for your visit and comment, Paul.
Date: 9/17/2018 9:50:00 PM
Line, congratulations on your win with your "fireworks show" haiku! I can see and hear the "sky ablaze" with "exploding colors."
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Mark Toney
Date: 9/18/2018 7:24:00 AM
Lol...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/18/2018 12:07:00 AM
LOL thanks for your explosive visit and comment, Mark.
Date: 9/17/2018 8:02:00 PM
Great Haiku, Line, congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/18/2018 12:08:00 AM
Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/7/2018 3:18:00 PM
Ooh, I love this one; I can see the red, blue, green and white fireworks exploding in the air while reading this; very well penned.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/7/2018 4:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, ML, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 8/7/2018 10:56:00 AM
Lovely image Line. Can hear the ooohs and the aghhs, I love a good display. Good luck. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/7/2018 4:40:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Tom.
Date: 8/7/2018 2:29:00 AM
Your haiku brings fireworks explosions into my mind, and my heart.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/7/2018 7:06:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/6/2018 11:26:00 PM
(setting...sky ablaze...[by] exploding colors!?) watch out for the n s a ; )
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/7/2018 7:06:00 AM
Fire ban in effect... thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sand.

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