Firework Showers

Firework showers Black silhouettes watching skies… Looking for freedom © Dane Smith-Johnsen July 1, 2010

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/9/2010 3:03:00 PM

I like the essence of this piece. The imagery is glorious. I like the flow of the title and how it comes to life with the last line regarding freedom. Great job! Joseph

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/3/2010 2:46:00 PM

Where did it go?...I can see the silhouettes..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/1/2010 1:42:00 PM

A very creative and intriguing image of the fireworks. Love that last line! Great haiku, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/1/2010 1:03:00 PM

Hi Dane Ann, nice picture of fireworks! Did you read my poems yet? All the best, Gert

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/1/2010 9:43:00 AM

Hey hon I'd take verb from line 1...pilot to co-pilot over and out!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/1/2010 3:47:00 AM

A nice pen picture. Good luck in the contest