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Pleiades 4 Contest sponsored by Joseph May

September 13, 2023

Firefly

Fly, little lightning bug
Flurry in marsh and field
Flash your flame at twilight
Flirt in the dark of night
Find yourself a new mate
Fascinating glowworm
Flourish in great numbers

Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2023

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September 15, 2023 at 2:48 PM

A smashing write to those little glow bugs. A most worthy win too. Congrats

Linda Alice Fowler

September 14, 2023 at 11:38 AM

Sweet little romantic poem Lin. Congratulations! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 14, 2023 at 10:31 AM

- Lin ... a romantic poem to the firefly - Congrats on your top win :) - hugs

September 14, 2023 at 10:46 AM

I was kinda in that mood when trying to find 'F' words that hadn't been used by many others. Thanks a bunch, Anne-Lise.

September 14, 2023 at 6:59 AM

Oh, this is another wonderful one, Lin, congratulations:)

September 14, 2023 at 10:46 AM

Thanks so very much for your congrats and thoughts, Jo.

September 14, 2023 at 6:47 AM

Wonderful write Lin, Congrats on your win

September 14, 2023 at 10:45 AM

Thanks for recognizing it as win worthy, Joseph.

September 13, 2023 at 3:23 PM

i would love to see one in real life but will have to settle for your vivid description Lin. hugs jan xx

September 13, 2023 at 5:20 PM

In that case, Jan I hope I’ve adequately described the beauty of their lights in flight. Thank you.

September 13, 2023 at 8:54 AM

Lin, this one sparkles, nicely done!!

September 13, 2023 at 9:00 AM

Hi Mark. Nice to meet you and thanks for such a kind comment.

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