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Pleiades 4 Contest sponsored by Joseph May

September 13, 2023

Fly, little lightning bug Flurry in marsh and field Flash your flame at twilight Flirt in the dark of night Find yourself a new mate Fascinating glowworm Flourish in great numbers

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Terry Flood

Date: 9/15/2023 2:48:00 PM

A smashing write to those little glow bugs. A most worthy win too. Congrats

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/14/2023 11:38:00 AM

Sweet little romantic poem Lin. Congratulations! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/14/2023 10:31:00 AM

- Lin ... a romantic poem to the firefly - Congrats on your top win :) - hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 9/14/2023 10:46:00 AM

I was kinda in that mood when trying to find 'F' words that hadn't been used by many others. Thanks a bunch, Anne-Lise.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/14/2023 6:59:00 AM

Oh, this is another wonderful one, Lin, congratulations:)

Lin Lane
Date: 9/14/2023 10:46:00 AM

Thanks so very much for your congrats and thoughts, Jo.

Joseph May

Date: 9/14/2023 6:47:00 AM

Wonderful write Lin, Congrats on your win

Lin Lane
Date: 9/14/2023 10:45:00 AM

Thanks for recognizing it as win worthy, Joseph.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/13/2023 3:23:00 PM

i would love to see one in real life but will have to settle for your vivid description Lin. hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 9/13/2023 5:20:00 PM

In that case, Jan I hope I’ve adequately described the beauty of their lights in flight. Thank you.

Mark Hughes

Date: 9/13/2023 8:54:00 AM

Lin, this one sparkles, nicely done!!

Lin Lane
Date: 9/13/2023 9:00:00 AM

Hi Mark. Nice to meet you and thanks for such a kind comment.