Firefly

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Written: September 12, 2023 Pleiades 4 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May ________________________________________________________________ Fireflies glide in blue sky Flood it with crimson light Flying light bulbs show threat Flickers of dusk green-gold Fleeting flares over fields Fluter brightens our gloom Follow bliss with broad wings

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/13/2023 6:01:00 AM

Every line says firefly. Beautifully described, my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/13/2023 5:49:00 AM

- A beautiful little creature... you have described its beauty with style, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/12/2023 10:57:00 PM

A delightful poem my friend, I can see the tiny creatures flying about spreading their sparkling auras. A precious poem, filled with bright happiness. Well done. I love it.