Firefly

There is a lightness and whimsy to your darling poem, Ink. Very delightful and a big congratulations on your win! :)

Such great imagery. Congratulations! :)

Love the sparks from the fireflies, Ink. A beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win. :)

- Congrats on your lovely win contribution, dear Ink :) - hugs

Very nicely done; congratulations

Very nicely done Empress, Congrats on your win

Absolutely love this one, Ink:) "Floating little light bulb" - wow!

I am carried away by the beauty of this pleiades. Fireflies are such lovely and magical bugs !' Flickering green gold' is the apt description for the luminence emitted by the firefly. So very enchanting poem. All the Best in the contest dear Empress !

Hi Inky, you have wonderfully written about the magic of fireflies! I love your use of color - "flickering green gold" and each line is a study in creativity, uniquely crafted with your fine touch of elegance - "flare of sparks dance composed." I know when I read your poems I will be smiling with delighted amazement at your poetic ability to carry me away into a magic place. If this is for a contest best wishes. Hugs and blessings to you. Thank you for sharing your beautiful gift!

Yeah!! Aren't they interesting. Great work about them. Way to go. I don't go out at night much any moe, but I remember when as a child I have caught them and watch them in a jar, but we always released them. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Another firefly fan here! I haven’t seen one for decades, I grew up in firheaven.. Chicago. To a little girl, they were pieces oh heaven that blessed the earth. A very touching, Pleaides, perfect, Ink!

This is so light and fluttery, just like the fire flies. Enjoyed.

Awesome one. I too did fireflies. I bet this title will be the most popular choice. Haven't put mine up yet, but I bet all of us firefly lovers will have used the word fly, flash and/or flicker!!!

Beautifully written; they seemed so cute together fluttering about. :)

Empress this is enchanting ! Floating little light bulb Indeed! That's exactly what they look like. To importantly mention the flightless female, then to end with the wondrous mating dance they compose, creates pure magic in the reader's mind. You have created a story for the luminous little fireflies as wonderful as your Pleiades implies. BOL I am sure its a winner. SV

Is firefly or fireflies a song? I kinda started singing and wondered if it was... this is an totally awesome arrangement of words and how you used the letter F is great.. can't be easy talking about a firefly and having to use the same letter, but you have described the mating process here... I don't know much about them, but males flash to attract females.. some females even kill them whilst mating and use their elements to protect newborn.. but im no expert... love a firefly though...

I love thé title itself . Firefly …. Reminds me of a song I did once . Love it

Dear Ink, I am enthralled by your exquisite creation, the Pleiades on Fireflies!!! Your writing is a radiant and melodious masterpiece, and I am completely captivated by the enchanting manner in which you have depicted the delicate fireflies. They shimmer and dance with such ethereal beauty, illuminating our poetic realm with a glimmering hope that is truly magical.

Ooo green gold .. I am soo in that green zone!!! .. love that vibe!!! Giving me glowing greenness .. flying with silent wings.. flare of sparks dance composed… gorgeous piece papi!!!

Omg, what a resplendent and mellifluous write this is my dearest Ink, I absolutely love how you've elaborated in such a magical way about the sweet little fireflies that often coruscate as a beacon of hope in our poetic world. I have just seen fireflies 1 time in my life, cuz here we don't see them much, but your words truly took me to a Dreamland. "Flickering in green gold", "flying with silent wings", "floating like little bulb" I want to quote whole of this.. So beautiful, whimsical and wow