Firefly

Flickering in green gold Floating little light bulb Flying with silent wings Flightless females await Flashing to find a mate Fluttering together Flare of sparks dance composed

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Laura Leiser

Date: 9/14/2023 7:09:00 PM

There is a lightness and whimsy to your darling poem, Ink. Very delightful and a big congratulations on your win! :)

Ink Empress
Date: 9/20/2023 10:16:00 PM

Awn thank you so much kind soul

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/14/2023 12:08:00 PM

Such great imagery. Congratulations! :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/14/2023 11:57:00 AM

Love the sparks from the fireflies, Ink. A beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/14/2023 11:04:00 AM

- Congrats on your lovely win contribution, dear Ink :) - hugs

Terry Miller

Date: 9/14/2023 8:31:00 AM

Very nicely done; congratulations

Joseph May

Date: 9/14/2023 6:59:00 AM

Very nicely done Empress, Congrats on your win

Ink Empress
Date: 9/14/2023 7:22:00 AM

Thank you so much for placing my lil pleiades. Truly grateful

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/14/2023 1:34:00 AM

Absolutely love this one, Ink:) "Floating little light bulb" - wow!

Ink Empress
Date: 9/14/2023 1:45:00 AM

Awwn thank you so much talented soul

Valsa George

Date: 9/13/2023 10:46:00 PM

I am carried away by the beauty of this pleiades. Fireflies are such lovely and magical bugs !' Flickering green gold' is the apt description for the luminence emitted by the firefly. So very enchanting poem. All the Best in the contest dear Empress !

Ink Empress
Date: 9/13/2023 11:31:00 PM

Aww thank you so much kind soul, i appreciate your visit

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/13/2023 10:14:00 AM

Hi Inky, you have wonderfully written about the magic of fireflies! I love your use of color - "flickering green gold" and each line is a study in creativity, uniquely crafted with your fine touch of elegance - "flare of sparks dance composed." I know when I read your poems I will be smiling with delighted amazement at your poetic ability to carry me away into a magic place. If this is for a contest best wishes. Hugs and blessings to you. Thank you for sharing your beautiful gift!

Ink Empress
Date: 9/13/2023 12:43:00 PM

Hi kind soul, you are so generous to read so thoroughly and to leave your very soulful thoughts of admiration for my poem, your comments are always so sincere and soul warming and a delight to read. I appreciate your poetic presence wholeheartedly. Thank you so very much . Pleiades arent always easy to do but i love learning

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/13/2023 4:25:00 AM

Yeah!! Aren't they interesting. Great work about them. Way to go. I don't go out at night much any moe, but I remember when as a child I have caught them and watch them in a jar, but we always released them. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 9/13/2023 12:42:00 PM

Oh wow that sounds so exciting and beautiful, to catch them and put them in jars. Lovely. Thank you for sharing this and for your visit too . Always grateful

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/12/2023 8:33:00 PM

Another firefly fan here! I haven’t seen one for decades, I grew up in firheaven.. Chicago. To a little girl, they were pieces oh heaven that blessed the earth. A very touching, Pleaides, perfect, Ink!

Ink Empress
Date: 9/12/2023 10:46:00 PM

Oh thank you for your sweet visit my dear PR, we dont really see fireflies in maldives, but as i travel alot i have seen them in another place and i must say its a magical experience, seeing them fluttering gold. I am so happy you liked my pleiades.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/12/2023 3:11:00 PM

This is so light and fluttery, just like the fire flies. Enjoyed.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/12/2023 10:42:00 PM

Awwn you are so kind thank u so much dear Nancy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2023 1:09:00 PM

Awesome one. I too did fireflies. I bet this title will be the most popular choice. Haven't put mine up yet, but I bet all of us firefly lovers will have used the word fly, flash and/or flicker!!!

Ink Empress
Date: 9/12/2023 10:41:00 PM

I cant wait to read yours , you always write so well. Thank you so much and yes not many word choices . I appreciate your support

Paige Hind

Date: 9/12/2023 12:36:00 PM

Beautifully written; they seemed so cute together fluttering about. :)

Ink Empress
Date: 9/12/2023 10:40:00 PM

Awwn thank you sooo much

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/12/2023 8:14:00 AM

Empress this is enchanting ! Floating little light bulb Indeed! That's exactly what they look like. To importantly mention the flightless female, then to end with the wondrous mating dance they compose, creates pure magic in the reader's mind. You have created a story for the luminous little fireflies as wonderful as your Pleiades implies. BOL I am sure its a winner. SV

Ink Empress
Date: 9/12/2023 10:40:00 PM

Awwn you are so generous and kind thank you talented poetess for your support and encouragement. I am truly grateful whenever you read my poem and leave your soulful thoughts, lifts me up

Silent One

Date: 9/12/2023 7:29:00 AM

Is firefly or fireflies a song? I kinda started singing and wondered if it was... this is an totally awesome arrangement of words and how you used the letter F is great.. can't be easy talking about a firefly and having to use the same letter, but you have described the mating process here... I don't know much about them, but males flash to attract females.. some females even kill them whilst mating and use their elements to protect newborn.. but im no expert... love a firefly though...

Ink Empress
Date: 9/12/2023 10:39:00 PM

Oh did you think of ems song? Haha. This is alot of information you’ve passed on here about fireflies, ah i need to read more . So interesting. Thank you so much for your visit and for reading and appreciating this pleiades. Always grateful for your support

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 9/12/2023 7:15:00 AM

I love thé title itself . Firefly …. Reminds me of a song I did once . Love it

Ink Empress
Date: 9/12/2023 10:56:00 AM

Omg yes its one of your songs haha love that

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/12/2023 7:09:00 AM

Dear Ink, I am enthralled by your exquisite creation, the Pleiades on Fireflies!!! Your writing is a radiant and melodious masterpiece, and I am completely captivated by the enchanting manner in which you have depicted the delicate fireflies. They shimmer and dance with such ethereal beauty, illuminating our poetic realm with a glimmering hope that is truly magical.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/12/2023 10:55:00 AM

Thank you for always seeing beauty in everything, you are very generous and kind, i appreciate your support always truly

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 9/12/2023 6:53:00 AM

Ooo green gold .. I am soo in that green zone!!! .. love that vibe!!! Giving me glowing greenness .. flying with silent wings.. flare of sparks dance composed… gorgeous piece papi!!!

Ink Empress
Date: 9/12/2023 10:43:00 AM

Awwn thank you so much papi

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/12/2023 6:47:00 AM

Omg, what a resplendent and mellifluous write this is my dearest Ink, I absolutely love how you've elaborated in such a magical way about the sweet little fireflies that often coruscate as a beacon of hope in our poetic world. I have just seen fireflies 1 time in my life, cuz here we don't see them much, but your words truly took me to a Dreamland. "Flickering in green gold", "flying with silent wings", "floating like little bulb" I want to quote whole of this.. So beautiful, whimsical and wow

Ink Empress
Date: 9/12/2023 10:43:00 AM

Awwn your thoughts are always so beautiful and uplifting, thank you for your encouragement. Truly grateful to have you here being supportive

Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/12/2023 6:48:00 AM

Best of luck in the contest, one of the most gorgeous takes this is! "Dance composed' creates the perfect ambience for a " Firefly ballet" :)