Firefly

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Written on September 12, 2023

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Frantic flickering, flames Furiously flashing Faultless reflections, lights Flourishing, unfailing Flamboyant hues, destined For forever, glowing Faithfully, flow of joy

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/14/2023 1:19:00 PM

Beauty flowing in your fireflies dear Gina. Congratulations! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/14/2023 11:12:00 AM

- Gina, congratulations on your win...you wrote this with emotion ... lovely :) - hugs

Joseph May

Date: 9/14/2023 9:11:00 AM

Congrats on your win Gina, Very nicely done

Valsa George

Date: 9/14/2023 1:40:00 AM

There is a flow of joy as we see fireflies lighting the dark night. Unfortunately their number dwindle day by day. Sad they are fast becoming extinct. Beautiful pleiades and a great entry for the contest. All the Best dear Gina.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/14/2023 1:15:00 AM

I love how you did yours, Gina:)

Marikate Kingston

Date: 9/13/2023 8:56:00 PM

Your poem dances. So light and pretty. I like it's alteration when it occurs. There is nothing like a firefly is there? Did you ever catch one and for only minutes watch it light up a jelly jar? Your poem is delightful. I've read it 3 times. Just lovely.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/12/2023 9:45:00 AM

Wow the wordplay and imagery in this descriptive pleiades is so impressive and magical. I can see them fireflies flickering gold as i read your lines. As always you’ve done it so well. Top winner for sure.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/12/2023 8:01:00 AM

Love their frantic flickering Gina, a perfect description of fireflies. BOL in the contest. from SV