Firefly



Frantic flickering, flames
Furiously flashing
Faultless reflections, lights
Flourishing, unfailing
Flamboyant hues, destined
For forever, glowing
Faithfully, flow of joy

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Linda Alice Fowler

September 14, 2023 at 1:19 PM

Beauty flowing in your fireflies dear Gina. Congratulations! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 14, 2023 at 11:12 AM

- Gina, congratulations on your win...you wrote this with emotion ... lovely :) - hugs

Joseph May

September 14, 2023 at 9:11 AM

Congrats on your win Gina, Very nicely done

Valsa George

September 14, 2023 at 1:40 AM

There is a flow of joy as we see fireflies lighting the dark night. Unfortunately their number dwindle day by day. Sad they are fast becoming extinct. Beautiful pleiades and a great entry for the contest. All the Best dear Gina.

Joanna Daniel

September 14, 2023 at 1:15 AM

I love how you did yours, Gina:)

Marikate Kingston

September 13, 2023 at 8:56 PM

Your poem dances. So light and pretty. I like it's alteration when it occurs. There is nothing like a firefly is there? Did you ever catch one and for only minutes watch it light up a jelly jar? Your poem is delightful. I've read it 3 times. Just lovely.

Ink Empress

September 12, 2023 at 9:45 AM

Wow the wordplay and imagery in this descriptive pleiades is so impressive and magical. I can see them fireflies flickering gold as i read your lines. As always you’ve done it so well. Top winner for sure.