Fireflies In My Head

angry sun's set red awoke fireflies in my head ~ lightning up my brains

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Date: 8/9/2020 1:52:00 PM

what vivid description, I've never seen a firefly - love that opening line GW:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/9/2020 8:06:00 PM

Me, neither... I mean it's hard for me to see all those fireflies in my head. Others do though. lol. Thanks, Jan! :) gw

Date: 8/9/2020 1:44:00 PM

I have never seen a firefly but it seems that I could benefit by the end of the day also. Enjoyed this write Gershon Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/9/2020 8:05:00 PM

Really?! No fireflies out your way, eh?! ~ I'll be a lightning bug!

Date: 8/9/2020 6:01:00 AM

Good one, Gershon, my brain could use some “lightning” up. Cheers, John

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/9/2020 8:04:00 PM

See reply to Jenish's comment below: My poor brain is incapable of further illumination... lol. Thanks, John!

Date: 8/9/2020 3:09:00 AM

Lol, can just imagine the scene Gershon Tom

Date: 8/8/2020 11:05:00 PM

lol... fireflies in head is new.. may be they will eat up your brain..Enjoyed your Haiku my friend.. wonderful thoughts..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/9/2020 8:03:00 PM

If those fireflies are trying to eat MY brain, they've got some mighty slim pickings! lol. Thanks, Jenish