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Firecrackers (Alliterations)

In a pick pack boom a wonderful light in the sky Beaming gleaming screaming people out in the street Watching the parade of light danced, glanced tranced Happy sappy snappy to watch the firecrackers so beautifully Amazing as it make the sky lively sparkly wonderfully It shone in the dark out in the park making the mark A sign of celebration in a cloud nine look so divine Graces in the space a part of beauty to embrace 22/9/07

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Matthew Anish

Date: 5/26/2014 8:23:00 AM

I love fireworks shows so I was touched by this poem. J.R.R. Tolkien wrote some excellent alliterative verse. Where are you writing from? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Lena Emp
Date: 5/27/2014 1:52:00 AM

Hi, Matthew thanks for this lovely comment. I am from the Philippines by the way.

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/10/2008 4:34:00 PM

Cleverly written. Fun to read! Congratulations on being featured this week!!~ Carrie

Lena Emp
Date: 11/3/2013 9:13:00 AM

thanks. :)

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/10/2008 8:08:00 AM

Congratulations Lena on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar

Lena Emp
Date: 11/3/2013 9:14:00 AM

thanks I didn't expect it. :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/10/2008 4:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week.Love, Carol

Lena Emp
Date: 11/3/2013 9:14:00 AM

thanks. :)

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 11/9/2008 5:05:00 PM

Congratulations Lena on your alliteration being featured. Vince

Lena Emp
Date: 11/3/2013 9:14:00 AM

thanks. :)

Date: 11/9/2008 4:08:00 PM

Nice use of rhyme and alliteration to provide rhythm to this poem. Congratulations on having featured this week. Best wishes for ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Lena Emp
Date: 11/3/2013 9:15:00 AM

thanks.:)

Ryan Cc

Date: 7/17/2008 1:23:00 AM

Alliterations are always a blast to read, although the form of this poem seems to be something else. Anyway, you make firecrackers sound magical, as it is. Better watch out for the firecracker shows in that gigantic mall, if you know what I mean.

Lena Emp
Date: 11/3/2013 9:15:00 AM

thanks. :)