Doris Culverhouse Poet Free verse

Fire Rainbow Clouds

Today I saw an unusual phenomenum
Bright colors like a rainbow burst
Across a wispy cloud or two

Red and copper, blue with sheen
like a million tiny candles
aquamarine and teal
a glimpse of heaven

I feel God has blessed me
with such a sight like no other
shared today with my family
a treasure beyond compare
also I feel an inner touch
from God to me, personally
Just to say-have a nice day!!

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...the rainbow clouds are a new view for me over the past 3 years...every time I see something new in nature I think how BIG is God?? How loved we are!!

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Matthew Anish September 12, 2010 at 8:31 PM Nature cam be wonderful or terrible. You capture iits beautiful side very well in this ode. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Hyle Chu September 11, 2010 at 10:39 AM "Across a wispy cloud or two", well written. The images are nice. I enjoyed this.

Harry Horsman September 6, 2010 at 7:38 AM it the wonders of nature, that convince me that it is the work of God. Doris,this is beautifully written. Harry

Brian Strand September 6, 2010 at 12:24 AM Yes Doris a rainbow's promise can do this.Rgds Brian

Cecil Hickman September 5, 2010 at 9:08 PM beautiful descriptive words with a powerful message truly a wonderful and inspirational write,,,Blessings..Cecil

Cas Davis September 5, 2010 at 4:36 PM Very nice poem. Uh.... Doris.... you don't by chance hail from near southern New Zealand do you?

Wilma Neels September 5, 2010 at 9:32 AM Beautiful Doris, reminds me of a saying that God whispers to us in his own unique way we just got to be open and willing to listen.. The images are just awesome, love Wilma

Constance La France September 5, 2010 at 6:38 AM Thanks for commenting on my poetry. A glimpse of heaven, how beautiful, I believe if we open our eyes, these glimpses are all around us, you have penned a lovely poem, with a tremendous message of God within and around...love Constance

Michael J. Falotico September 5, 2010 at 5:54 AM I love rainbows, when my Dad passed I saw one right over my building where I live... Lovely write and brought back a nice memory..in my fav. it goes...thank you Michael

Sidney Hall Mad Poet September 5, 2010 at 5:27 AM I normally see that sort of phenomonum from my room which is padded so I dont hurt myself. Funny isn't it D we see the same things. :-)

Sara Kendrick September 5, 2010 at 4:31 AM Your father and I saw one such thing one day and he surprised me by saying that that phenomonum has a scientific name..I haven't seen anything like that in a long time just like the rainbows earlier this year..Long time no see these things..I feel that God is reminding us of his promise..Mom

James Fraser September 5, 2010 at 2:36 AM Awesome clouds they are Doris, a prism of colours. Have a great day >> James

Joy Wellington September 5, 2010 at 2:02 AM Really, really enjoyed this Doris! Thanks for all comments, I had lost my love but found it again. As the widow who lost her penny and when she found it she called everyone to celebrate with her, so I have found my love again and this is my celebration. The poem, My Tears, is just expressing feelings of regret, for lost time and unnecessary pain for us both. Much luv, Joy (Jew)

Deb Wilson September 4, 2010 at 11:04 PM Simply beautiful images..Take care~Deb

Dr.Ram Mehta September 4, 2010 at 9:32 PM The world is too much with us and we have no time to stand and stare at the nature" Wordworth. But you found the time to watch one of His unusual Phenomenon, Doris