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Fire Magic-Nette-E

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 comets flashing hot-rod wands
             still~ trellis of clouds twine hands
             shared pillows curl ~ ~ holy lands
             luscious pout expands





* isn't it nice to make up after a fight?

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(( for Lina-Marie's " Magnet Marvels" ))

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Carol Sunshine Brown

March 14, 2011 at 5:37 AM

Congratulations on your win Nette in Linda-Marie's contest "Magnet Marvel". Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

March 13, 2011 at 6:42 PM

Congratulations on winning in the contest. This is one of the better dodoitsu pieces I have seen.

John Freeman

March 13, 2011 at 1:19 PM

Great to see you at the top Nette with this honorable win in fourth place. Congratulations on your honored win. Agape, Moses

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

March 12, 2011 at 1:45 PM

A fabulous Dodoitsu a great 4th.place win nette.Thanks so much for my congrats on"CRYSTAL".~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Wilma Neels

March 12, 2011 at 1:12 PM

I would say yes it is Nette :) Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest ;) Wilma

Kash Poet

March 12, 2011 at 7:24 AM

Yes it is always very sweet to make up after a fight ;)! Congrats Nette on your well deserved win!---kashinath

Harry Horsman

March 11, 2011 at 11:37 PM

Well this is different, Nette, awesome, congrats. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

March 11, 2011 at 10:21 PM

Congratulations on your unique magnet!

Joyce Johnson

March 11, 2011 at 7:39 PM

Almost worth the fight. Congratulations Nette. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 11, 2011 at 6:45 PM

Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Linda, nette

Sara Kendrick

March 11, 2011 at 4:10 PM

Congratulations..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

March 11, 2011 at 3:32 PM

My dear Nette, I do love being in the same list of winners of you.. Congrat my friend..always Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 11, 2011 at 2:57 PM

Congrats Nette on your success in my magnet contest luv.. truly stunning entry ..thankxx for your constant support...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 11, 2011 at 4:28 AM

Judging over this weekend luv.. too much to concentrate on this Friday with work and our businesses... thankxx for your lovely comment on my contest entry for Francine.. I always try to be in luv..haha..

James Fraser

March 11, 2011 at 1:46 AM

The best part of breaking up, it's the making. So the lyrics go. Oh to see this luscious pout in it's desire to expand. I'll lead you to the meadow so, reach out, please take my hand. Lovely poetry Nette, have a lovely weekend....:)

Audrey Haick

March 10, 2011 at 11:52 AM

Love it, Nette! Another for the Winners' List, for sure. I haven't done one yet...writer's block. lol I dig but come out half empty, so I'm passing time. Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 9, 2011 at 6:55 AM

thankxx for supporting my current contest Nette dear friend.. good luck.. am sure will be super amazed as always with your prolific pen...

Andrea Dietrich

March 9, 2011 at 12:33 AM

Seems romantic, Nette! What does the E stand for? heehee

Sara Kendrick

March 8, 2011 at 3:09 PM

Good one that reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed.Good luck in the contest..Thanks for your kind review..Sara

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

March 8, 2011 at 1:09 PM

Poetically profound images my friend! I want to fight just to make up like this... Sure to be a winner... Great luck Nette. Lay

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

March 8, 2011 at 1:09 PM

Poetically profound images my friend! I want to fight just to make up like this... Sure to be a winner... Great luck Nette. Lay

Carolyn Devonshire

March 8, 2011 at 10:26 AM

You bet it's nice to make up after a fight, especially if you're doing it as you described, Nette. Best wishes in the contest. Returned your Soup mail. Love, Carolyn

Sidney Beck

March 8, 2011 at 10:11 AM

Nette, my views on Japanese forms are worthless, but based on what little I know, isn't such a form meant to be unrhymed? also I detect some metrical elements, and I ask isn't this cutting across the rules? Also verbs...aren't they ideally excluded? Please ignore my comments if they don't make any sense. On other hand, I do like the phrases such as (especially) "luscious pout expands"...very sensual, almost tangible, also "twine,curl, hotrod". I wish I could do the poem justice my friend