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Fire In Your Eyes (Rondel)

With the look of Fire in your eyes; Your touch is like a searing Flame; Adonis must truly be thy name; Touch hotter than the fourth of July; Scorching contact taking me high; My love for you I do proclaim; With the look of Fire in your eyes; Your touch is like a searing Flame; Surely you will not deny, You, I will never tame, You, I will never blame, I can do nothing more than sigh, With the look of Fire in your eyes. ~3rd place in the "The Rondel" Contest by Jared Pickett~

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Date: 6/28/2010 4:40:00 PM
Well congrats again Tirzah and u and I and Debbie all sharing spot number three..like the three musketeers of poetry..and friends... awesome.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" on this great winner.
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations Tirzah on your win in Jared Pickett's contest "The Rondel". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2010 9:50:00 AM
a real scorcher!excellent example of form! Light & Love
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:30:00 PM
LOL LIKE THE LINE "YOU, I WILL NEVER TAME",, CAUSE WE SURELY CAN'T EVER TAME .ENJOYED -IRMA
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:00:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Tirzah. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2010 1:19:00 PM
Wonderful Rondel Tirzah and hope u enter it in Jared's contest as he will LUV LUV LUV it .. anything passion or romantic will catch his eye and this one is well written ... give it a try .. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/7/2010 12:40:00 PM
This has got passion ,I like it very much ! All the Best !
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