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Forbidden, deep inside her heart it grew. It needed only one spark to ignite. Repressing it was what she had to do. Extraordinary was the ember’s might! Incessantly, she had been tempted till No longer could she fight, so she gave in! That man she’d been resisting broke her will. Hotter, the ember burned beneath her skin. Exploding with passion, she then was lost. How quickly by lust’s flames was she consumed! Exquisite was the burning, but at what cost? A deep regret soon rained down; she was doomed. Rejected by the scoundrel and bereft, The woman, alone and with child, was left. Written April 28, 2016 for the ELEMENTS Part 4: Fire Contest of Brian Davey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/12/2016 11:23:00 AM
Straight from the heart with a cleanser for the mind. A powerful seven and an absolute wonder.
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Date: 5/9/2016 8:15:00 PM
G'day Andrea ... such a pleasure to read another fine poem from you - thank you - Lindsay
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Date: 5/9/2016 4:59:00 PM
Rushed over to read this acrostic sonnet after seeing your comment to 'Indulgent Love'. Yes, the similarities are there....but not at all surprising...great minds think alike:) ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 5/5/2016 3:43:00 PM
Another Acrostic Sonnet. Congrats on your win Andrea.
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Date: 5/5/2016 5:06:00 AM
Andrea, congrats on your wonderful placement in Brian Davey's Elements # 4 -Fire contest!
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Date: 5/4/2016 11:11:00 AM
Andrea, congrats on your placement with this very clever poem! :)-luloo
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Date: 5/4/2016 9:28:00 AM
Exquisite! Great acrostic following a traditional rhyme scheme, with gripping content.
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Date: 5/4/2016 8:13:00 AM
Alas this happens more than we can imagine. The fire starts inthe heart, consumes the brain and finally the soul when betrayed. Beautiful (and sad) poem Andrea... it ignites the emotions. Congratulations on a a wonderful poem and a great win.
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Date: 5/4/2016 3:40:00 AM
Fire in just more than the heart also in the pit of my stomach for men who can so easily just vanish when A baby is on the way. It happens so often and it is something that I will never understand! Passionate yet sad Andrea! Congrats on your placement in my contest
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Date: 5/4/2016 3:27:00 AM
Great truth in your write:) Congratulations Andrea:)
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Date: 5/4/2016 2:00:00 AM
I knew this would score high Andrea. Back to congratulate you! #7 ; )
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Date: 5/3/2016 6:33:00 PM
I like your take on the 'element of fire' theme. Andrea. Congratulations on your fine podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/3/2016 6:00:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 5/3/2016 11:29:00 AM
An acrostic sonnet, very creative Andrea, not mention a lusty twist on the theme. Excellent!
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Date: 5/3/2016 10:10:00 AM
A beautiful betrayal...is that a paradox? Very touching.
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Date: 5/3/2016 4:43:00 AM
This is great fire igniting poem and a great story xxxx
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Date: 5/1/2016 7:27:00 PM
This is awesomely EXCELLENT!! So glad I picked this one to read today. A 7 and another fav.
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Date: 5/1/2016 4:34:00 PM
Once again you meld two forms into a coherent and excellent oneness Andrea. Once more you place a most excellent write in a contest Andrea. You once again paint your canvas with such wonderful heat. I wish you well in the contest. This write truly meets the criteria for the contest. Hi Andrea, once more your words encase you vision, your vision is fire. Your creative talent always shows through. This is a seven and it goes into my faves. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 5/1/2016 2:25:00 AM
A great entry for the contest! He wanted outside the box and so far all the fire poems have been. I like the way you went the extra mile and made the entire poem acrostic as well as a sonnet! This is sure to place high my friend! #7 ; )
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Date: 4/29/2016 11:09:00 PM
Love this very creative sonnet my friend.. Form, flow and message great. Superb poetry and a great entry in that contest.A7
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Date: 4/29/2016 11:53:00 AM
I just left a disneyish poem of yours about Mothers and books for this adult-world sorrow. Cussing words, that poem just didn't work out well for her, did it? Seriously, I was entertained and impressed with your form. It's okay that it brought me back to adulthood - ha ... CayCay
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Date: 4/28/2016 9:34:00 PM
You definitely scorched the paper with this write Andrea...Well penned...A7
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Date: 4/28/2016 5:48:00 PM
A timeless story where lust begets sadness
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Date: 4/28/2016 4:51:00 PM
fire can burn... i like how this turned out, andie... ohh so superb.. mail soon!..huggs
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Date: 4/28/2016 2:48:00 PM
Wonderful stroke of writing skill and with meaning. You constantly amaze me. "Exquisite was the burning, but at what cost." Love the line. Love, daver
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