Fire and Ice

The Devil sits there playing, he’s as happy as he can be
He has a new game to play, he rubs his fiery hands in glee
Down in the bowels of the earth, the deepest hottest spot
Where white magma burns, he collects it, in his devilish crock.

He keeps all the tortured souls he has collected through the years
Especially the greedy ones, he know how to play on their worst fears
Crucibles of white hot lava, he makes them pound all day
Until their muscles burn and burst, then the devils imps do flay.

The skin they flay from their backs, but still the pounding goes on
And little by little a diamond is formed, each one the bestest one
A pile of diamonds the devil has them make, but still the lava pours
The pounding must continue, piles of diamonds grow on the floor.

The clarity, the excellence, this perfection in clear carats
The devil tells them he wants more, the imps take skin from their backs
More and more diamonds they are looking as cool as ice
He taunts the greedy souls down there he says “Now don’t they look nice.”

When he has a mountain of them, he lets the pounding halt
The lava stops pouring for a while, and then there is a jolt
The poor tired souls are staring at this mountain of ice-like gems
When the Devil pulls a lever the pounding starts again.

This time a floodgate is open and he says they can take their fill
They can cool themselves on the diamonds; they can try it if they will
The clearest of all the diamonds, send shivers down their spines
They try to pocket a few but the devil says …“They’re mine.”

Another gate is open, lava flows through hot, the crucibles refilled
The Devil says now get to work I don’t want to see a single drop spilled
When they can work no more, he lets them have a rest 
Then opening up another door he says “I bet you all have guessed.”

“Now you have made more wealth, than the world can ever use
These cool pieces of pounded lava, this ice mountain you are going to lose
Just watch my merry greedy souls, just watch my new display
As a running river of lava washes the ice clear diamonds away… 

Now I will show you what we will do with all of them 
Just watch how they melt down, so we can start all over again
So pound away my merry soul’s, pound and pound them well
This is what you loved before; you found the love of money was Hell

Competition Entry: Fire and Ice. Sponsored By Carol Sunshine Brown 
 
© Mandy Tams~GG~ 21/11/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/23/2012 5:54:00 PM
Wow, great write, great win.
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Date: 12/24/2012 1:59:00 AM
Thanks Jon xx
Date: 12/19/2012 6:32:00 AM
Great write indeed and a well desrved win, Congrats, Mandy!! Jag
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Date: 12/24/2012 1:59:00 AM
Thanks Jag, all the best my friend xx
Date: 12/19/2012 4:47:00 AM
CONGRATS! very eerie and ominous. Love that" you found the love of money was Hell" so profound! :)
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Date: 12/19/2012 4:59:00 AM
I wish I had some to find it was hell lol Thanks Yvette love xx
Date: 12/19/2012 4:27:00 AM
This is really great! Big congratulations on your super win my dear friend, Mandy! love/hugs,LG
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Date: 12/19/2012 4:40:00 AM
Thanks Love ,hope you are keeping well xx
Date: 12/19/2012 2:31:00 AM
Congratulations my friend Mandy on your fantastic win. Wishing you a blessed Christmas. Hugs/Love Maria
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Date: 12/19/2012 4:25:00 AM
Thanks Maria love, all the best to you an yours xx
Date: 12/19/2012 12:36:00 AM
Awesome and wonderful piece,Mandy...Great imagination full of splendid images..Good work my great friend...Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win......XOXO...
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Date: 12/19/2012 4:26:00 AM
Thank you my friend your comment means a lot to me xx
Date: 12/18/2012 11:53:00 PM
Great write, and amazing flow of images...congratulations on your win, Mehnaz
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Date: 12/19/2012 4:27:00 AM
Thanks pd xx
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Date: 12/19/2012 4:26:00 AM
Thanks Mehnaz, all the best to you and yours my friend xx
Date: 12/18/2012 8:38:00 PM
Hola Mandy, 2 perceived opposite meanings when it comes to "FIRE And ICE" :-) Congratulations with your winning poem In , Carol's contest... goodnight~ PD
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Date: 12/19/2012 4:28:00 AM
I see my thanks jumped up a spot, so thanks pd xx
Date: 12/18/2012 6:17:00 PM
congrats on your first place win Mandy
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Date: 12/19/2012 4:29:00 AM
Yours too my friend xx
Date: 12/18/2012 4:33:00 PM
I sure remember this one, Mandy. glad to see it scored high for ya. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/19/2012 4:30:00 AM
Thanks Andy, I quite like this one too. lol xx
Date: 12/18/2012 2:59:00 PM
wow Mandy this is great well done.....Seren
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Date: 12/19/2012 4:30:00 AM
Thanks Sassy love, I appreciate it and congrats on your win xx
Date: 12/18/2012 1:45:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest and congratulations on your placement Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/19/2012 4:31:00 AM
Thank you Carol for my spot, I did so enjoy this contest love xx
Date: 11/27/2012 3:07:00 PM
Wow! Mandy this is awesome. I love it! Thanks for a very enjoyable read. :-)
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Date: 11/28/2012 1:27:00 AM
Thanks Lillie glad you liked it xx
Date: 11/23/2012 9:39:00 PM
Gosh, you really put a lot of work in to this one, mandy . a sure FIRE winner. Yes, hell might very well be that thing the evil love most turned against them. What a parable!! (thanks for all your comments to my poems today. that was sweet of you!) Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/24/2012 6:05:00 AM
not sweet just needed a good read, lol xx
Date: 11/21/2012 10:52:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Good work..Great idea for the topic of your contest entry..Thanks for stopping by..That little ant gave me a surprise..I am still wondering how in the world did it get in the groove of the gasket of the freezer..Sara
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Date: 11/21/2012 10:56:00 AM
Creepy little things aren't they, and thanks I appreciate you taking the time Sara xx
Date: 11/21/2012 10:39:00 AM
poetic intoxication like this should be compulsory, it is so compulsive, and a joy to read.........
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Date: 11/21/2012 10:50:00 AM
Thank you kind sir xx
Date: 11/21/2012 9:51:00 AM
Good luck in the contest! Devilish work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/21/2012 10:51:00 AM
Thanks Mathew, xx
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