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Fire and Ice

Everytime We kiss Wild Hot lava hits the sea in seizmic tremor Senryu for passion and fun Charma

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/12/2010 1:02:00 AM
Charma, fantasic Senryu. Wild hot lava! Great
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Date: 4/10/2010 10:59:00 PM
Charma, I love it! Living in Hawaii I could relate. Excellent Senryu. love, Connie
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Date: 4/9/2010 10:29:00 AM
I think barbecue season is here with this hot senryu, Charma! Sizzling indeed!
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Date: 4/9/2010 5:45:00 AM
I am tantalized, rhapsodized, teased, and aroused all at once ... these are the words that make a man believe beyond belief. A great and sensuous write. One love
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Date: 4/8/2010 7:48:00 PM
I am there... serve me up some of that fire and ice... OK I won't be greedy my dear sweet friend Charma.. but being with Ron for three whole days ...WOW ... your poem is my mantra... passion and fun just about sums it up... see I have taken your wise advice...and happy again..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/8/2010 1:16:00 PM
wowie, Charma!!
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Date: 4/8/2010 8:06:00 AM
A truly passionate write Charmaine ! Now thats a hot kiss ! james
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Date: 4/8/2010 6:59:00 AM
Passionate indeed, dear friend. Terrific senryu that is so true to your style. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 4/8/2010 4:00:00 AM
Now that would be an interesting kizzzzzzz...Sara
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Date: 4/8/2010 2:43:00 AM
Sizzling Senyru Charmaine >> James
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Date: 4/8/2010 1:23:00 AM
Very romantic I enjoyed it
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