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Fire

stoking the fire inside of him - a burning desire for revenge

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Laura Hay

Date: 4/26/2018 7:55:00 AM

A great Monoku Paul, makes me want to know more about the revenge plot!! :)warm regards, Laura.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/28/2018 8:49:00 AM

Thank you, Laura. Sometimes we get that sudden urge for revenge, but on due consideration we realize that it's not the right answer. ~ Warm regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/3/2018 7:42:00 PM

Hello Paul wow! This is a great haiku. Regards Darlene De Beaulieu.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/5/2018 3:16:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely encouraging comments, Darlene! Best regards // paul

John Michaels

Date: 1/12/2018 5:03:00 AM

Succinct but profound: the perfect recipe for a Monoku. Nicely done, Paul. All the best, John.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/15/2018 3:19:00 PM

Thank you, John. Excuse the late reply, but my computer has been playing me up. Regards // paul

Maria Williams

Date: 1/7/2018 3:39:00 AM

Wow you are certainly on fire Paul - congratulations. I'm still catching up on your works - you know Christmas and New year and all that. A very Happy New Year to you my friend and all the best for 2018...Maria xx

Paul Callus
Date: 1/7/2018 8:51:00 AM

Thank you, Maria...and I so very much appreciate your catching up on my posts:) I know you are very busy throughout the whole year! May you find happiness, serenity and inspiration during 2018. Warm regards // paul

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/4/2018 10:36:00 PM

Wonderful Monoku, Paul - Happy New Year and congratulations on your win, my friend - well-deserved! :-)

Paul Callus
Date: 1/5/2018 4:34:00 AM

Thank you, Gregory. Hope the new year will bring you happiness and inspiration, my friend. Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 1/3/2018 12:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Paul, great monoku. Hugs Eve ~`*

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2018 1:36:00 PM

Thank you, Eve...saw you standing nearby on the winning podium:) Hugs // paul

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/2/2018 4:12:00 PM

Congrats, Paul. powerful poetry. love it.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2018 1:37:00 PM

Thank you, Harry. All the best. // paul

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/2/2018 9:46:00 AM

Powerful one-liner. Congrats, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2018 1:53:00 PM

Thank you very much, Line. Regards // paul

Judy Konos

Date: 1/1/2018 7:59:00 PM

WOW most unique!9

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2018 1:45:00 PM

Even the wow sounds most unique, Judy:) Thank you and best regards // paul

Riley Hood

Date: 1/1/2018 5:40:00 PM

Love the fire in this! Congrats ,Paul! :)

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2018 1:52:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by with a comment and congrats, Riley. Best regards // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/1/2018 4:59:00 PM

This hot write is deserving of a big congratulations Paul. An excellent monoku. So happy to be sharing the podium with you again ~ a wonderful way to begin the new year my inspired friend :) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2018 1:18:00 PM

Thank you for coming back with hot congratulations, Susan:) Always a pleasure to share with you. ~ Warm regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 1/1/2018 4:19:00 PM

Congratulations, friend, on your win. I knew it would rank right up there. You'll always rank a first in my book.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/2/2018 4:13:00 PM

A pleasure to have you coming back with congrats and awesome comments, Rhoda. Thank you! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2018 3:47:00 PM

YEs! Fire as revenge. Good one, Paul, and congrats for your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2018 12:47:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 1/1/2018 3:03:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise:) A lovely way to start off the new year:) Hugs // paul

Silent One

Date: 1/1/2018 12:17:00 PM

Great one liner Paul..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Paul Callus
Date: 1/1/2018 2:44:00 PM

Thank you S-1. Pleased to be on the winners' list. Hope you had a good start to the new year! Regards // paul

John Fleming

Date: 1/1/2018 5:43:00 AM

Hope your Christmas was a merry one, Paul...all the very best for your New Year - my warmest regards! :) john

Paul Callus
Date: 1/1/2018 7:57:00 AM

Thank you, John. Christmas was lovely, and the new year started off on the right footing:) Hope yours did, too! Regards // paul

Supraja Kannan

Date: 1/1/2018 2:52:00 AM

Such a deep one liner...Good luck in the contest... Wish you a very Happy New Year...

Paul Callus
Date: 1/1/2018 7:49:00 AM

Thank you, Supraja. The new year started off warm and sunny...now it's cold and cloudy! Regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 12/31/2017 11:32:00 PM

Oh ouch! This one burns hot. Great entry.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/1/2018 7:48:00 AM

Thank you, Rhoda. My pen is still smoking:) Hope you had a great start to 2018. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/31/2017 7:00:00 PM

Great! GL in contest!

Paul Callus
Date: 1/1/2018 7:38:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. Best regards // paul

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/31/2017 4:57:00 PM

great poem to go with the title, paul! wishing you a happy new year...

Paul Callus
Date: 12/31/2017 5:42:00 PM

Thank you, Ilene. Wishing you also a happy, prosperous and fruitful New Year! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/31/2017 2:19:00 PM

Flows with fierce emotions--well written, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/31/2017 3:35:00 PM

Glad to read your meaningful contribution to this one liner, Vijay. All the best for the new year. // paul

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/31/2017 11:44:00 AM

Oh sharp one!

Paul Callus
Date: 12/31/2017 3:33:00 PM

Thank you, Maureen. So pleased to have you visiting. Regards // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/31/2017 11:40:00 AM

Wow! Hot stuff Paul. Revenge is so scary and consuming.. your brilliant monoku depicts this seething emotion of hatred deftly. Beautifully expressed my wonderful friend! ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 12/31/2017 3:32:00 PM

Thank you Susan for the 'wow' and lovely comments. I read your entry for this same contest and I really enjoyed it! ~ Warm regards, my friend. // paul

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 12/31/2017 11:32:00 AM

Revenge is a hot topic indeed!~Good luck in the contest Paul!~Che :)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/31/2017 3:28:00 PM

Revenge burns people on the inside, tears them apart, Cheryl! There is a solution to it called forgiveness. ~ Thank you for stopping by on a day when most people are busy with end/start of year:) Regards // paul