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Fire - Friend and Fiend

Flames from a fuming dragon's snout, Igniting all that's in its route, Rendering to ash and cinder, Extinguishes self like tinder. Such is the nature of fire, Destroyer of vaunted desire, Nullifier of unbounded pride, Death-dealer, with no side. When Prometheus stole the blaze, The God's in terrible raze, To the rock did him bind, And screwed with Human's mind. Thus Fire, Man's greatest friend, Is also a means to his fiendish end! ~ 26 Apr 2016 ~ *word raze purposely used in place of rage to show the self-consuming nature of both

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/5/2016 9:09:00 AM
Thank you, Balveen. Your poem was really graphic. Loved it.
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Date: 5/5/2016 8:51:00 AM
Congrats Karam!
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Karam Misra
Date: 5/5/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thank you, Balveen. Your poem was really graphic. Loved it.
Date: 5/4/2016 5:06:00 PM
Great opening line! Congrats!
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Karam Misra
Date: 5/4/2016 8:38:00 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 5/4/2016 11:05:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. And yes, the Titan figured in both our poems.
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Date: 5/4/2016 10:19:00 AM
Very nice! Prometheus was in mine as well...
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Karam Misra
Date: 5/4/2016 11:37:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. And yes, the Titan figured in both our poems.
Date: 5/4/2016 4:16:00 AM
"It is also a means to his fiendish end" was such an excellent ending to a fine poem and definitely deserved to be mentioned in the winners list! Congrats and great job
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Karam Misra
Date: 5/4/2016 4:28:00 AM
Thank you, Brian, for your encouragement.
Date: 4/26/2016 7:30:00 AM
Ooooh! Nicely done.
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Karam Misra
Date: 4/26/2016 8:03:00 AM
Thank you, Cecil, glad you liked it.
Date: 4/26/2016 1:53:00 AM
Dear Karam, Well penned .Enjoyed............with love.
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Karam Misra
Date: 4/26/2016 2:26:00 AM
Thank you very much, Manmath! And I need not tell you of the eponymous God of Love and his relation to Lord Shiva's all-consuming fire!

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