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Finish This Verse - For Susan Burch's Finish This Verse Contest

Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
My heart explodes
With the thought of you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 10:41 AM
susan, my friend. where are you lately? Haven't gotten an email for a few days? hope all is well. Luv, Andrea
Grisetti Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 11:44 PM
Good job finishing this poem. there are so very many ways to rhyme, and you did it nicely.
Boyle Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 6:34 PM
Thanks guys, for taking the time to comment! Bea
Kendrick Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 6:10 PM
Enjoyed reading this one this eve...Sara
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 5:53 PM
I really like yours. Belated congrats on your win.
Poet Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 7:35 PM
This is very nice Beatrice.Congrats on your win.
Brown Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 12:27 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in the "Finish This Verse" contest Beatrice. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 11:52 AM
Great finish there Beatrice, congratulations xx
Susan Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 10:10 AM
Beatrice, Congratulations on your win in my contest!
A   Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 8:06 AM
Good morning ;-) beatrice good luck in contest , thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good one*always~pd"
Andresen Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 3:48 PM
Well done - brilliant ending. Luck to you in contest Beatrice. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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