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Finish This Verse

Roses are red, Violets are blue; Could be a weed - Aint got a clue… For Susan's contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2012 5:40:00 PM

Jack, I am very glad to see this one high on the list. Congrats to you.

Kash Poet

Date: 3/19/2012 7:19:00 PM

Congrats Jack on your win.Enjoyed the humour here.

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 3/19/2012 6:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your 3rd place win in this contest...Continue to fly higher and higher,,,

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 12:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in the "Finish This Verse" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/18/2012 2:39:00 PM

Congrats on your great winning work..Knew it was a winner..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/18/2012 1:23:00 PM

bravo Jack and congrats on great ending lines to this verse luv.. thinking of u my friend .. hope all goes well..luv..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/18/2012 11:31:00 AM

Great finish there Jack love it congratulations xx

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 3/18/2012 9:56:00 AM

Jack, Congratulations on your win in my contest!

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 3/18/2012 9:38:00 AM

This is so cute Jack-A big congrats. to you :) It would also be funny if you took the "a" out of line three-LOL :)

Gautami Phookan

Date: 3/16/2012 9:38:00 AM

This one is so cute Jack.. never thought a weed would fit into this :) Love this so... huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2012 8:22:00 PM

Hey, I was thinking, which "weed" did you mean? heehee. Aren't you loving seeing these verses from folks?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/14/2012 9:23:00 AM

haha Jack.. amother cool write luv.. re,inds me we have to inspect our garden today too luv.. good luck in contest.. and for your surgery too.. I am going in next week.. we will recoup together..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2012 12:44:00 AM

hahaha, LOVE it, Jack. I think Susan will too.

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/13/2012 7:15:00 PM

This is a truly wonderful write for Susan's creative contest! I thoroughly love the interesting content of your poem! My line that I love has to be the last line that encapsulizes the whole poem, "Ain't got a clue" quite the humor right there! I really enjoyed your write that I have read this evening! I love your write a lot! Great Work!!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/13/2012 7:12:00 PM

Could it be true you mreally knew? Great entry Jack and wish you all the best in the contest.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/13/2012 5:00:00 PM

Cute..Got a chuckle..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..I will have to check out Susan's contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/13/2012 4:06:00 PM

Jack, I like yours ending.... Luck to you in contest. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise