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Finish This Verse - For Susan Burch's Finish This Verse Contest

Roses are Red Violets are Blue My heart explodes With the thought of you

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2012 10:41:00 AM

susan, my friend. where are you lately? Haven't gotten an email for a few days? hope all is well. Luv, Andrea

Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/22/2012 11:44:00 PM

Good job finishing this poem. there are so very many ways to rhyme, and you did it nicely.

Beatrice Boyle

Date: 3/22/2012 6:34:00 PM

Thanks guys, for taking the time to comment! Bea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/22/2012 6:10:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one this eve...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2012 5:53:00 PM

I really like yours. Belated congrats on your win.

Kash Poet

Date: 3/19/2012 7:35:00 PM

This is very nice Beatrice.Congrats on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 12:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in the "Finish This Verse" contest Beatrice. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/18/2012 11:52:00 AM

Great finish there Beatrice, congratulations xx

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 3/18/2012 10:10:00 AM

Beatrice, Congratulations on your win in my contest!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2012 8:06:00 AM

Good morning ;-) beatrice good luck in contest , thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good one*always~pd"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/13/2012 3:48:00 PM

Well done - brilliant ending. Luck to you in contest Beatrice. - oxox love Anne-Lise