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Finish the Dream

Trying my hardest to compose myself, until I reached my final limit. “Where are you?” I exclaimed loudly. He came to save me once again.” Almost positioned like a bag of potatoes Black is all I see as I hold on tightly. I know we’ll be alright because I have you protecting me and I am protecting you. The darkness finally ceases leaving us free to leave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/24/2011 3:56:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Lauren. Please continue to write you will do very well. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/21/2011 4:39:00 PM
welcome to poetry soup, I really enjoyed your work,
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:39:00 AM
The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Lauren. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:34:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry contest entry for Matt.. good luck with finish the dream .. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv...
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