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Fingertips Poised To Kiss

Well, the path lengthened out
  past any horizon
the crickets and cicadas
  firing up their sweet strings

We headed toward heaven
  that late afternoon
thin lines of sweat o'er our lips
  fingertips poised to kiss

when the rains came
  our jackets torn off 
maneuvering for advantageous position
  steam floating o'er faraway plains



          ~  August 16, 2021  ~
 A Brian Strand 2 to 14 line Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 8/17/2021 1:31:00 PM
Oooh, that was nice my friend. Very romantic, soft and beautiful.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/17/2021 5:32:00 PM
Thanks, Chris! Hey, do you remember Stevie Wonder's hit song, 'Fingertips, Part II?" (circa 1963). ~ Nah, I don't remember it either...
Date: 8/17/2021 7:05:00 AM
Amazing write, Gershon:-) It was a joy to read!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/17/2021 5:37:00 PM
Edward, thanks for weighing in, and nice to see your avatar, sir! ~ Gershon

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