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Fingerprints---Senryu

Fingerprints, my child. Artwork,everywhere, so mild. Dreams of days lost, wild. 3/18/2021 ~2~ Rhymed Senryu

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Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 3/19/2021 5:00:00 PM

Pangie, you have mastered the composition of the senryu! Another wonderful verse from your very versatile quill ! Bob

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/20/2021 8:18:00 AM

Bob, I learned this form elsewhere and I Really like it. I don't feel at home with Unrhymed haikus. Many great Poets here can pen those, don't you agree? Thank you for your time and friendship. Pangie 3/20/2021

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/19/2021 3:50:00 PM

Hello Panangiota, finger prints on a wall of a child's room would be delightful for the child. Because the child's fingerprints would be their. Hugs Darlene xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/21/2021 7:59:00 AM

Oh, a missing reply? How nutty because I did! Kids put fingerprints everywhere. As they start to walk, fingerprints on walls, glass doors,furniture.....refrigerator doors. Kids are not confined to a room, once they are mobile.they leave forever fingerprints on your heart. Hugs, Pangie zz

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/20/2021 3:25:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, yes i did comment. Hugs Darlene. I am glad I did to.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/20/2021 8:14:00 AM

Darlene! I think ghosts are chasing us.))) I found your comment And NO reply button?? So I PRESSED EDIT , and a reply box came into view. Yaaa. Kids put fingerprints everywhere, no kidding. It's part of growing up. They grow up way toofast. Glad, glad that you commented. Hugs Pangie 3/20/2001.??

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/19/2021 1:20:00 PM

In our state they put the handprints of children on the walls of the Capitol when International Children's Day arrives. Lovely senryu, Panagiota! Hugs, Carolyn

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/20/2021 8:07:00 AM

Caroyn, what a beautiful idea and a tribute to children. I can tell you love them. A good sign, Thank you for stopping by. In appreciation, Pangie xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/19/2021 12:27:00 PM

- Smile ... they leave their mark ... lovely written, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/20/2021 8:04:00 AM

Hello, Anne Lise...love fingerprints. It's too soon, out tykes grow up. Thank you, Hugs, Pangie

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/19/2021 5:44:00 AM

Beautifully done. Love it... God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/19/2021 9:24:00 AM

Reginam hi! I am so glad when a poet is unafraid to say they like a poem. I consider that a real gift, wrapped it ribbon. Hugs, Pangie xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/19/2021 1:32:00 AM

Reminds me of those fingerprint paintings parents do when their kids are born then for the next few years are wiping windows and walls, cleaning up after them. Lol. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/19/2021 9:22:00 AM

Lol, Tom. You got that one right....))))? Hugs, Pangie xxx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/18/2021 8:18:00 PM

Never lost when you have your imagination, your memories and your mighty pen!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/19/2021 9:19:00 AM

Love, love, the way you put this Caren! Perfect.. Hugs,Pangie xx

Judy Ball

Date: 3/18/2021 6:39:00 PM

Ah the marks left on the walls that bring back memories, the fingerprints left on your heart, irreplaceable. Nice job Pangie. God Bless, JB

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/19/2021 9:18:00 AM

Hello Judy! Those fingerprints, ah, Judy, so precious. I still have grandsons's toys, drawings, bibs, utensils and more. These keep me happy when I am alone. He's off to High school in September...but I have so many movements to remember.. Finger prints on the heart as you said. Hugs, Pangia xx